fic for paddyabroad (1/2)

[formation_akame]

Title: #840704
By: alienashi
Pairing: Implied Kame/Jin
Word count: 20,120-ish
Rating: PG13
Genre/Warnings: AU/Crossover with Death Note, mild swearing, inaccurate portrayals of the Japanese post-war judicial and penal system, usage of unsightly terms to refer to other people, and slight depictions of violence.
Notes: As implied, this story took place

Comments

[paddyabroad]

uhm. Hi there. Your link did not work. Considering this fic is for me and I know shit nothing about Death Note and apparently have to know it to read this... can I get a functioning link? Or should I just head wiki-wards?

[discofilia]

Link - does this work?

This is a sock (need to use one because kx doesn't allow anon posting); I'm the original author here. I really hope this doesn't hinder your enjoyment of the story? *feeling quite bad*

[paddyabroad]

Ah thank you, yes that worked.

Let me be honest with you, if this had not had my name on top I would not have read it for a couple of reasons.

However, I am done with this, the first part and you have an incredible fitting style for this kind of fiction. Topic-wise somewhat angsty, you manage to narrate the hardship without making it painful, especially with Jin's general positive attitude. I do have a bit of trouble figuing some details, like where the first scene with the wardens happened or such. Oh and sempai input makes me smile.

As of now my favorite though are the interactions Kame has with Jin. As they are mainly reduced to active speech I like the flow, especially considering dialogues are my personal pain in writing.

So don't worry. While not the sort of fic I would usually read I do appreciate the effort and I am sure there are a bunch of people around who will appreciate this duely in all its details.

[becroberts]

Ooh, I'm fascinated by this one. So many of the sections end on tense little cliffhangers, the kind that would kill me if I were to read this over the course of a week. I'm not really sure where the story's going and that's intriguing me, making me want to know more. It's been a while since I read/watched Death Note but I do recall enough to get the references (mixed with JE - now I'll never be able to see Matchy in the same way again!). I love that you managed to incorporate Kizuna into this, and the way the relationships are developing between the guys in the prison (of course Jin and Koki bond over a fight...).

Time to see where this is going! :-)