Fic for lonelybusiness

[formation_akame]

Title: THE BIG, EPIC AKAME LOVE STORY (as told by Tanaka Koki)
By: littlealex
Pairing: Akame
Rating: PG-13
Genre/Warnings: This is so gen it's not funny. But actually it is sort of funny.
Prompt (if used): N/A
Notes: I'm not sure this is what anyone would have asked for, but I hope you enjoy it lonelybusiness! ♥

Summary: So, I have these friends. They're idiots. I mean

Comments

[ashi_ga_demasu]

I'm just on the first few paragraphs but I just wanna post immediately that I am loving this ♥

[ashi_ga_demasu]

Okay, I'm done reading and I officially declare I love this with all my heart.

You made Koki sound like a very good storyteller. Simple. Straight to the point. No fuss. Amusing. Funny. Engaging. I can go on and on. The story being told may be Akame but you somehow made it about KAT-TUN (or so I imagined them). And that's epic.

Whoever you are who wrote this, I♥U and I can only envy lonelybusiness.

[littlealex]

I have always thought Koki would be a great storyteller, so I'm glad it came through!

I'm glad you liked it, thank you so much for the kind comment! ♥

[froidaux]

Omg this is such a sweet, sweet story. ♥ There are so many fics that try and explain Akame's relationship but this almost seems the most realistic, told from Koki's point of view. Probably because it's exactly not what the title states, this grand, epic, ~life-altering~ tale, which I'm sure occurs naturally with the POV of Jin or Kame, since they're the ones experiencing it. But Koki really gives it some real perspective, and it's awesome. ♥

[littlealex]

♥ I'm glad you liked it! The thing is, it is an epic tale of life-altering proportions, but telling it from Koki's point of view dissipates a lot of that. Which is sorely needed when it comes to Akame, sometimes. ;) Thank you for the comment!

[changetje]

Wow, this is such an amazing fic ♥ I loved how you got Koki to tell the story, instead of Jin or Kame. I also loved how you got through their entire history (I'm such a sucker for history!fic), taking everything that's KAT-TUN been through with it. It kind of feels like a KAT-TUN fic, rather than an Akame fic, but I think I like that even more. And I love Ueda's blunt comments all the time xD This fic is really brilliant ♥

[littlealex]

I do love history fic, too, mostly because I haven't explored it myself as a writer - I'm definitely going to go back through this and write some parts more in-depth from non-Akame points of view. I'm glad you liked it! ♥ Thank you for the comment! :D

[kaminikaku]

that was lovely. I really liked how you kept the entire thing from Koki's point of view, so we only know what he does. I love the way you showed that akame were friends as well as lovers, and when it went pear shaped it hurt all of them. lovely job on characterisations as well.. loved it!

[kaminikaku]

that was lovely. I really liked how you kept the entire thing from Koki's point of view, so we only know what he does. I love the way you showed that akame were friends as well as lovers, and when it went pear shaped it hurt all of them. lovely job on characterisations as well.. loved it!

[littlealex]

thank you for the comment! i thought it was important to look at the story we all know so well from another point of view :) i'm glad it went over so well! thank you~ ♥