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kiuolo

The Ugly Ducklett [Fanfiction]

Nov 21, 2011 23:45

Title: The Ugly Ducklett
Fandom: Pokémon
Summary: Green, an ugly ducklett pokémon, just wants to be accepted. One day, he's had enough. He decides to leave and find the place where he really belongs. But what's this? Red's following him? Green/Red/Green. Gameverse. A Pokéfied version of "The Ugly Duckling."
Pairings/Characters: Green/Red/Green, Touya ( Read more... )

masarashipping, fanfiction

Comments 9

phzblue November 22 2011, 06:14:01 UTC

This is just so sweet and cute!
It's really wonderful Kiuolo-samaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

kiuolo November 24 2011, 19:20:42 UTC

o///o

Thank you so much! I worked really hard on it so that it would be finished on time, so I was worried that might have effected the already-subpar quality. But I'm really glad to hear you thought it was wonderful!

tennouji_nerin November 22 2011, 06:15:51 UTC

Kiuolo, you should be apprehended for manslaughter!!! "Why", you ask? Because I have died of moe-overdosage and first degree squealing just by reading this fic! Especially the last part.....THE LAST PART....!! Having been KO-ed many times earlier, that was the official limit break. Silly Green! But of course Red loves you the most! Now go and make some poke-eggs together!!

kiuolo November 24 2011, 19:32:33 UTC

Noooo, Nerin! Don't die! QAQ I love you and don't want to be a widow yet! *revives*

The last part was kinda my favorite, too, if only because that's where I was able to let my love of fluff really run wild. xD It was pretty corny, but I had to do it. Plus, it was a good way of tying Green's birthday into the fanfiction. Haha.

Oh, they will definitely have some poké-eggs together! x3 It may not have said that in the story, but I try to imply things like that so hard, you know.

minamiyori November 23 2011, 03:42:57 UTC

Awww, so funny and fluffy!

kiuolo November 24 2011, 19:33:40 UTC

Yay! That was the reaction I was going for! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! <3

darknessneko November 23 2011, 20:28:49 UTC

D'aww! This was too cute for words. Seeing Red follow him just to give him a birthday present and never giving up until Green realized made me want to hug both them and never let go! <33 Yet it took me forever to realize Ducklett was the English name for Koaruhie. xD

There, ‘hiding’ behind one of the many trees that surrounded them, was Red. About half of his body was hidden, the other half peeking out as he stared at Green.

No one can escape from ducklettStalker!Red! XD

You deserve cookies for this fluffy fic of awesomeness!

kiuolo November 24 2011, 20:10:16 UTC

Yaaay! You really think I was able to pull off the cute? =D I wanted it to be, but I was afraid it was boring in some places...

xDDD I might have used the name Koarukie, but it didn't flow as well with the title, you know. In "The Ugly Koarukie" vs "The Ugly Ducklett", I'm afraid the latter wins.

Well, we all know Red can be determined when he wants to be! If he's gotten it in his head that he's going to stalk you, he's freaking going to stalk you. xDDDD You cannot run or hide from ducklettStalker!Red!!

*perks up* Cookies? =3 Would these hypothetical cookies be chocolate chip?

darknessneko November 27 2011, 06:24:54 UTC

You definitely did! It was cute all through out~

No, no, using Ducklett is genius! It's like Nintendo was urging you to read this fic. Nintendo has given their seal of approval! xDD

That's right! Be it rain, snow, or hail, ducklettStalker!Red will be right behind that tree staring at you! He probably joins it, that sneaky duck.

Why, yes! I just so happen to have a plate full of chocolate chip cookies fresh out the oven~