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kiuolo June 21 2012, 04:29:10 UTC
I love you, too~! <3 I would share all of my scans with yoouuuu~

xD I love YGOTAS so much. So, so, so much. I also really love that scene. Haha. Poor Yami.

You want a summary? I can do that! >3 I actually thought about completely translating this, but I'm still not 100% confident in my translating skills. Plus, it's in handwriting, and I'm still not good at reading handwriting. Let me see here...

The first few pages are just them greeting each other. On page 005 Yami asks if Yuugi is awake, and Yuugi says "Yes!" and goes to open the window.

Page 006 Yuugi says, "Good evening, mou hitori no boku," and then we start a short flashback of when they first met.

On page 007 we see when Yuugi first found Yami. He looks out his window and sees Yami sitting on his roof, and Yuugi asks him what he's doing. Then Yami says...

Yami: ...You // can see me?

Yuugi confirms that he can, and Yami replies with, "Is that so?" He then apologizes and says that he was just resting and that he's leaving now. Yuugi seems a little reluctant to let him go, though. x3

Page 008 Yuugi apologizes for disturbing him and says that he can continue resting. Yami says he's a weird person. xD

Page 009 Yuugi yells at him to wait and then asks if Yami will be coming again. He then yells out to him that his name is Yuugi. Yami briefly angsts about how he doesn't have a name (I think. I'm pretty sure) before telling Yuugi...

Yami: My name is also // Yuugi

Page 010 Yuugi yells out, "Thank you for telling me!" and Yami flies away.

Page 011 Yuugi watches him fly away and says, "Amaaaazing..."

Page 012 Yami contemplated about the name thing and thinks, "I guess this is a good thing." And then in the box, "'Yuugi,' huh?"

I'll tell you about the rest later. It's really late and I need to get to bed because I have to wake up early. x.x Sorry... But at least now you know how they met in the doujinshi~

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saitoki June 21 2012, 13:15:53 UTC
Thank you, that explained a lot! I have a feeling the puzzle can make normal human fly, so I think Yami put it on Yugi neck everytime they go out so he wouldn't fall. I would look closely at it later XD. Oh and I didn't realize it was hand written. My hand writing is so horrible I doubt anyone could get out what I write if I do that with my doujinshi. x.x The tablet would help make it even more unrecognizable I bet.

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kiuolo June 23 2012, 06:10:54 UTC
I'm happy to hear that it helped! =D And yeah, this doujinshi is in handwriting. I can read the hiragana and the katakana just fine, but it's hard for me to read kanji I don't know that's been handwritten. x.x But hey, my handwriting is so bad I can't complain much. Haha.

Anyway, let's see about finishing up telling you about what they're saying!

Page 013 the flashback ends. Yami says Yuugi's name, and Yuugi asks him what he wants. Yami says he just wanted to say his name. Yuugi says, "What's with that?" and that "Mou hitori no boku is strange." Then they start talking about a delicious ramen shop.

Page 014 - The ramen shop is kind of expensive, it looks like. Yami says he'll take Yuugi there if he wants to go.

AND THEN WE HAVE PAGE 015
Yami: Come with me // Aibou
Yami holds out his hand, and Yuugi takes it...!!
Yuugi: ....... // Okay...

(Sorry, I really like that page xD SO CUTE)

Next couple of pages Yami and Yuugi are flying there. On page 017 we get our first look at the puzzle. Yuugi says that he's fine, but the wind is loud. Yami gives him his puzzle to wear, and it helps Yuugi. The wind doesn't hurt his ears anymore.

On page 018 Yuugi says the puzzle looks like a precious item. Yami replies that it is, but he'll let his aibou borrow it. Yuugi looks embarrassed and thanks him, saying that he'll borrow it. He then says that "Mou hitori no boku sure is a kind person." Yami seems to deny it (I think? His sentence was confusing to me).

Page 019 - They made it to the ramen shop. Yuugi convinces Yami to come and eat.

Page 020 - Scene change! Yami is thinking by himself when Bakura appears, calling Yami "Ou-sama" (king/ruler). And... I'm sorry, it's hard for me to read what Bakura's saying. There's too much handwritten kanji I don't know. >.< He says something like, "Hey, Ou-sama! // Nowadays you *something something something*" Then in the next panel he says something about crying when he sees the family predecessor? I don't know. Yami replies, "...That's right... Maybe."

Page 021 - Bakura flies away, saying, "Che! // You fool!!" Then something about pleasure and pain, and baiting (Yuugi?) to fall in love with the ruler of succubi. Then Yami is alone, thinks something about how they haven't even kissed.

Page 022 - Yami thinks to himself that he's scared of breaking Yuugi. Another scene change, and Yami is with Yuugi again. Yami wants to do something to thank Yuugi for the ramen.

Page 023 - With a big smile Yuugi says it's not a big deal, but Yami says it was painful for his pocket money (?). Yuugi seems to get depressed all of a sudden, so Yami goes, "Aibou?" But Yuugi just tells him, "I'll see you later..."

Page 024 - Yami gives Yuugi his puzzle again so he doesn't hurt his ears. Yuugi asks if it's okay, and Yami says it is and that it seems to like him. Then they're going again~

Page 025 - Yami tells Yuugi to hold onto him if he's scared. Yuugi says, "Okay // But don't drop me, okay?" Yami laughs and says he won't.

Page 026 - Yami asks if Yuugi is scared. Yuugi says he is, but he remembers the other day was okay. Yami says, "Is that so? // Well then, let's fly up higher."

Page 027 is pretty self-explanatory. Yami and Yuugi are flying and Yuugi's just going, "Wa~~~~!"

Page 028 - Yami teases Yuugi and Yuugi calls him mean. xD

BUT THEN...!

PAGE 029!!!!!!!
Yami: I'm sorry. It's just because you're so cute.
Yuugi: What~~~!!?? // C...
THEN YAMI KISSES YUUGI...!!
Yami: ...Sorry.

PAGE 030!!!!!!!
Yuugi: ...Ah // Yeah...
Yami: ♥ // By wearing that puzzle, even a human can fly. (<--You were right, Saitoki! ^^)
Yuugi: Is that really so?
Yami: Yes // Do you want to try?
Yuugi: Yeah!
After Yuugi has a little fun flying around, he suddenly looks odd. Yami asks what's wrong, and if he really is scared.

Page 031 - Yuugi says it's not scary, and he wants to, but he wonders if it's okay. Yami says he expects it won't be bad? (I think?)

Page 032 - Yuugi marvels at the dark sea, saying it looks amazing. Yami agrees, and thinks to himself that it's a beautiful night.

(the rest in my next post since I've exceeded Livejournal's character limit xD Yeah...)

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kiuolo June 23 2012, 06:11:27 UTC
Page 033 - Yuugi exclaims, "It's so beautiful!" And Yami thinks something like how he wishes he could lock him up in the middle of this night. I think. When sentences get too long I start to get confused, I'm ashamed to say. *sobs*

Page 034 - I think I’m just going to skip this, because when I tried translating my brain started to hurt. x.x

Page 035 - Yami reveals he’s a succubus demon. Yuugi is quiet for a while, then asks if he’s eaten from him. Yami says no, and then Yuugi asks why. THEN…!!
Yami: I love you // Aibou

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND ON PAGE 036…!!
Yami: I want to kiss you. // I want to // embrace you.
Yuugi: …Huh…?
Yami: I want to have sex.
Then Yuugi falls backwards. xDDDD
Yami: …… // You okay?

Page 037 - Yami says that he doesn’t want to do it just to eat, but because he loves him, so if Yuugi isn’t scared
THEN…
Yami: Aibo…
YUUGI CUTS HIM OFF BY KISSING HIM~!!!!

PAGE 038!
Yuugi: You’re not scary at all!
Yami: Ah // Aibou??
Yuugi: It’s because I love you, mou hitori no boku.
AND THEN YUUGI HUGS HIM~! =DDD
Yuugi: Just who was greatly afraid of flying? // I really love you, mou hitori no boku…

The next few pages are mostly sex noises. xDDD

Finally we get to 045 and Yami is saying twice that he loves Yuugi, and then he begins reflecting on things. Cute banter happens on page 046.

Sorry that was so long and that it took me forever. >.< My 'summaries' never seem very much like summaries, do they? I always think I should be brief, but then when I try I keep thinking of other things I want to add, and then I'm just like, "SCREW IT. I'll just say everything," and then it's no longer a summary. xD

Anyway, a brief disclaimer: I have only been taking Japanese classes for about a year now. I know this isn't all completely correct, and I'm sorry for that, but I did my best! >.<

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saitoki June 24 2012, 11:31:44 UTC
Damn, I thought it was cute before, and after your explaining it got even cuter. XD Thanks for taking your time to sum it up for me~ And I don't mind your commentary at all, they are funny. XD The line that cracked me up the most was " I want to have sex." XDDD I wish I could draw something like that XD. Oh and my doujinshi is up, go ahead and read it, XD

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