Fanfiction: Sticks and Stones [OneShot

Apr 21, 2009 23:02

Sticks and Stones
Pairing: Kihae
Summary: Discrimination is a heartbreak.
Rating: T
Word count: 1419
note: Set before Coffee Break.
sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt you. )

fanfiction: coffee break, pairing: kibum/donghae, fandom: super junior

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kitkii April 22 2009, 03:17:20 UTC
spot for yeonnie

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yeonah April 22 2009, 14:26:54 UTC
O.O OMG!
Can I shoot those bullies? Please? How can people be so discriminatory???
I hope they rot!
*fumes silently*
The KiHae is FTW! And it's awesome to see where they're coming from, before Coffee Break...
I still want to give those bullies a good kick in the rear.
THIS WAS AWESOME KIT~!!!!
fjk;ladajf;
I'd rant more, but my class starts in four minutes and it's at the other end of the school X.X~
I Love You Kit~!!! Saranghayeo~!!!!
<333333333333333

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kitkii April 22 2009, 04:05:05 UTC
D: *revives*

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renichifreak April 22 2009, 03:21:29 UTC
this was amazing...like, I don't have words...It was just simply amazing

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kitkii April 22 2009, 04:03:00 UTC
D: Carey is to kind DDD:

Thank you for all your kind words~ ♥

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sbluesnow April 22 2009, 03:25:48 UTC
SPOt

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sbluesnow April 22 2009, 03:49:27 UTC
KIBUM YOU TEASE! lol

Donghae whimpered slightly, reaching out a hand to bring the shorter man back....
kibum isnt shorter than hae
kibum's taller.
he's like 177 cm
while hae is like 175 cm

fuckin bullies!
who are they??
WHAT ARE THEIR NAMES?
WHERE DO THEY LIVE???
WHAT CLASS?
COUNTRY? SCHOOL??
IM GONNNA KICK THEIR ASS!
NO! F--KING KILL THEM!
*punches code into secret vault of weapons*

donghae's so right
they arent worth your time bummie
let it go
but that doesnt mean i have to let it go LOL

jkrjoeshfidhfrfrkjehrkehruieshrkjhfjieshrtrkjehre
why??
whyyy bummie must be blind??
I FEEL LIKE SOMETHING BAD IS GOING TO HAPPEN
SOMETHING TERRIBLE!

Oh to Siwon! please don't let anything bad happen!

NOOOO!!!!!!!
BUMMIE! PLEASE BE OKAY!
SEIROUSLY BUNCH OF F--KING IFJHKHFUIESHRUIEHRUIAETHIAETH
if i ever get my hands on them, they're so DEAD
yes i know this is fiction. what's your point? i'm crazy,
i live in my own world you know that LOLYESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS ( ... )

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kitkii April 22 2009, 04:01:59 UTC
OMG YOUR COMMENT O_O ;JSLKDJLKJ

Thank you for pointing that out!!! I fixed it!

Aw your reaction, i love how protective you are~ If you ever meet them, I'm sure I wouldn't want to be them o_o bullies are cruel, but revenge is sweet, yes?

ROFL, Julie, you do know that this is Coffee Break verse right?

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sbluesnow April 22 2009, 04:10:31 UTC
LOL haha this comment is actually pretty short

VERY SWEET! kkekeke

kjtngkljgkldsgdljfkl; NOO I DID NOT KNOW THAT!

NOW I DO!
damnnn fine eunhyuk do that to TABLO! LOL

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imsweet_11 April 22 2009, 04:39:22 UTC
Before the bullies could counter with anything, Eunhyuk arrived, panting and out of breath, with a policeman following closely behind. “God you two,” Kibum smirked as Donghae cupped his face and kissed him again. “I can’t believe you guys are like this after all of that.”

Donghae parted their lips just enough to give Eunhyuk a reply, “Isn’t he sexy after a fight?”

Eunhyuk moaned, cursing his life. “You’ve been spending too much time with Heechul.”

hahahahah...cute hyukkie... running all the way for help and found out both his frnds were mushy all over^^
hahah...hae defntly get his silly attitude frm heechul..only heechul can act like that^^

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kitkii April 22 2009, 04:52:03 UTC
lmao~ thank you for reading~! Heechul is so influential o_o

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