fanfiction: white wishes [One-Shot]

Dec 10, 2009 00:38

White Wishes
Jongkey | PG-13
In a grey world, white wishes prevail.
Words: 3,152
a/n: take a wish and make it better. Listen to this song while you read. Happy holidays a bit early! ♥

But wishes couldn’t come true, not in a world where ash fell, not snow. )

pairing: jonghyun/key, *oneshot, fandom: shinee

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kitkii December 10 2009, 05:38:51 UTC
spot for Belial, thank you for the prompt darling ♥

I hope you enjoy it ^^~

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dongbangsuju20 December 10 2009, 19:59:18 UTC
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kitkii December 10 2009, 05:58:31 UTC
DD: tearrrrssss /wipes them awayyyy. see? i told you it wasn't sad instead itsbittersweet like humanity something a little less.

thank you for enjoying jenna~ <333 and even moreso for reading, I'm glad you like it ♥

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kitkii December 10 2009, 05:59:15 UTC
spot for steph because Jenna says its a good idea ^^~

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robotiques December 13 2009, 21:06:05 UTC
Oh...mygod.

Kit.

;~; I can honestly say that this is hands down one of the most amazing things i have ever read. Ignoring the fact that I have a SHINee/Jongkey/kit bias. I am so serious.

The story, the setting, the characters, the words. I loved every bit of it. A whimsical, beautiful love story. It was so perfect. So heartwarming. I had that feeling in my chest, like when you want to cry from happiness.

I can't get over how well you write these two. i just. omg i really don't even know what else to say. I'm feeling a bit at a loss for words.

I just loved this so much. So so much.

ily♥

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kitkii December 14 2009, 03:10:29 UTC
really? as in, really, really? you are so much amazing steph i can't even describe it. I'm so ecstatic that you like this even all bias aside; thank you so much--as in i could cry from happiness in that something i write even just a fanfiction has that much meaning for you.

thank you ♥

ily2♥♥

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robotiques December 14 2009, 18:48:56 UTC
Really really. Everything was portrayed so well. Especially the emotions, every moment of sadness, want, wonder, happiness, etc. I felt like I myself felt it too. It's so rare for me to come across fanfiction that has this effect on me. And I don't even view what you write as "fanfiction" really. I don't know, you always tell a story with your writing, Your writing has depth, and meaning. Which is why I am always captivated by it.

Ah~~ no no. You are the amazing one here. ♥

please write Jongkey forever and ever. I am beyond addicted.

You're welcome~! /rolls all over youuuu

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intricateorchid December 10 2009, 06:03:11 UTC
I loved this SO FUCKING MUCH. You have NO idea. ♥
You made my heart hurt. In a good way. In a very good way. ^^
We take it for granted sometimes, huh? Our ability to feel, I mean.
Okay. Spaz time.

AJLIEJTROIEAJTLAIJETJAE. I LOVED IT SO MUCH PLEASE MARRY ME AND WRITE FOR ME FOREVERRR. I thought you characterized everything so perfectly and explained all of the feelings so well. UGH. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE YOU.
Thank you for writing and sharing, dear! I really appreciate it! ^^

Ahh, the magic of Christmas.

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kitkii December 10 2009, 06:58:00 UTC
Aw, I'm glad you liked it ♥ I don't know why all my things seem to have that twinge of bittersweet to them lately, but I'm glad you read it~ I think feeling is important. If we forget how to feel we kind of forget our self worth. and then. well...

Really? I was so afraid I characterized them wrong so thank you so much~ ♥

Christmas saves lives? :D

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intricateorchid December 10 2009, 07:09:21 UTC
I think bittersweet is more realistic. ^^ I kinda like it that way sometimes.

I think you characterized them fine!! I especially like how you described the feelings, though. It's so difficult to say what it's like, but you hit the nail right on the head. :)
I'm really hoping you write more! I'm looking forward to more of your works. ♥ ^^

Yes, yes, it does. It didn't just save Kibum's, it saved MINE TOO!
It's not even Christmas and I already read a good story! :P
My life is saved! Hahahaha.

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kitkii December 10 2009, 07:31:07 UTC
me too. life isn't all sunshine and daisies. if it was i'd have hay fever ):

thank you, i tried to emphasize them so that means a lot to me~ ♥ I will! I'll do my best to write more soon~ (i'm behind on requests though so I don't know when I'll be able to write shinee fic again orz)

yayyy~~~ :DD /showers you with confetti!

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ontokki December 10 2009, 06:09:55 UTC
I totally did not expect Key to be a robot. But omg, this is so sweet ;_; All the little details of the world and then white snow fell and Key became human ;~; I loved it♥

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kitkii December 10 2009, 06:59:26 UTC
lol, yeah I kind of wanted people to just find out subtly~ xD

Thank you so much, that means so much to me you don't even know~ ;~; ♥

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