[writing babble] Giant argh

[kittyspeak]

There's a huge logic error in the Red Box. I switch between who has the red box in my mind and with that I totally fuck things up in the story.

*sigh*

That's what revisions are for, right? I apologize profusely to anyone daring enough to read the WIP. I hope you don't hit the end and go what the fucking hell?

Blarh.