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kittymayhem

The ONE

Jun 06, 2009 01:05

Title: The ONE (5/12)
Fandom: DCU (mostly) Slight crossover with Marvel
Pairings: Clark/Lois, Bruce/OC, John/Wally others implied
Characters: Clark Kent/Superman, Bruce Wayne/Batman with appearances from various people
Word Count: 5,080
Rating: This chapter: PG-13
Warnings: Alcohol consumption, Angst. (what more do you want?) oh, some SAP and ( Read more... )

superman/batman, the_one, wip, clark/bruce, slash, crossovers, john/wally

Comments 6

northern_star June 6 2009, 05:31:10 UTC

Can't tell you how happy I was to find this now! :D (I have insomnia... woke up, couldn't fall asleep again, came down and opened the computer, but it's hard to write when you can't turn on the lights, so reading is like...the best thing ever to spend some time on!)

Loved this part -- it's always so amusing, but sweet at the same time. :) About died laughing when drugged!Bruce grabbed Clark in a bear hug so he wouldn't leave. Teehee!!

I'm really enjoying this story! Totally looking forward to the next part.

kittymayhem June 6 2009, 06:09:16 UTC

You have the insomnia too?

Me, My whole sleep cycle flipped on me. I can't stop writing!:) Now if only I were getting paid for it! lol

*grins* I am amazed at what administered drugs will do. Bruce...is always fun to mess with and I had to make him act on his inner child!(I think I once slapped a male nurse when I was coming out of my anesthesia...mom said so. *shrugs* Cussed out the doctor too. XD)

*bounces* Happy, Happy, Joy! Love that you're enjoying this. Makes writing the next part MUCH easier. :)

cat_13145 June 6 2009, 08:01:52 UTC

This is getting good. Poor Clark. Bruce with no mission for any period of time would drive most people insane.
Glad that in the long run he's going to be O.K. (if he listens)

kittymayhem June 9 2009, 13:53:07 UTC

:) Sorry for not replying sooner. Life is...complicated.

Yes, Bruce with no mission is guaranteed to drive anyone insane. :) Which we will prove as we go along! And...since when does Bruce listen?

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

anonymous June 6 2009, 10:47:27 UTC

I'm going to do a reactive review as it's the least I owe you. I hope it's alright and I'll admit I often don't have time. Here goes.

"It is me...or am I posting too much?? *ponders* I think I am...I can't stop writing and posting...and writing..."

No you aren't. I look forward to your posts. I'm biased though. ;-)

" He couldn’t blame them. Bruce and the word “hospital” just didn’t belong in the same sentence."

Oh Bruce.

"There was something to this pacing thing. Clark didn’t really dwell on it too long; his thoughts kept flaring back to Bruce and how he was doing."

Oh Clark.

" J’onn was the only one who was absent."

So everyone else is there. For a loner and surly bastard he sure has people concerned about him. I love it.

" “He needs a babysitter.”"

Hehehe.

"Bobby smacked his head. “Duh! Hi Hank.”"

Ooooo. I love Hank although I'm not knowledgeable about the comics. I watched the animated series in the nineties and the films. But I've only read a few trades years ago.

"Bruce Wayne was not a happy man."

Heh. Poor dear.

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kittymayhem June 9 2009, 13:57:29 UTC

Sorry about not replying earlier. :) My life is weird.

I've never had a reactive comment before...and it was fun to read! Thanks ever so much! :) It makes me feel a little better about posting so much.

Loved your reactions! :D Thanks for the typo alert. Will fix it, like...when I get BACK home.

More fic...now. *laughs* I just posted. *runs away*