Comments | kitsuneyujji: drabble: Pink is the Color of Unhappiness (dooseob)

kitsuneyujji

Aug 03, 2010 00:17

Title: Pink is the Color of Unhappiness ( Read more... )

Comments 8

maxism12 August 3 2010, 20:41:55 UTC

Wow! I really like this fic! It's really well described!

kitsuneyujji August 4 2010, 08:05:56 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ^^

snb123 August 4 2010, 06:28:42 UTC

poor Yoseobie! this was really good! that planner totally sounds like something he would do!

kitsuneyujji August 4 2010, 08:05:36 UTC

:x I wanted to have the happy "Doojoon is back" faces be yellow, but that wouldn't show up so well. ^^;;

marieloffantasy August 4 2010, 23:50:15 UTC

for a 5 minute fic this was nicely done =)
Very cute~

kitsuneyujji August 5 2010, 11:26:29 UTC

the last line bugs me. :x it conveys what I wanted to convey, but not how I wanted to convey it.

Still. ^^ 5 mins.

^_^

Thank you~

marieloffantasy August 5 2010, 17:35:31 UTC

It's fine, it's not as bad as it could be.

You're welcome~ :3

yunsias August 5 2010, 14:44:36 UTC

OMG WAE SO CUTE! It's funny how pink is used to line the days when Doojoon isn't with him and thus sad days.