Dancing Man 2/6 - Dancing Queen

Mar 06, 2010 20:07

Author:kitsune_tails. Though just call me Jay.
Pairings: Mike/Kurt
Disclaimer: Glee and all affiliated characters are property of their respective owners. Not me.
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Rating: PG now, different later.
Genre: Romancy, Self-Discovery.
Summary: Everything is a dance. Every step has one that follows. Every turn brings us to a new revelation, a new ( Read more... )

kurt, mike, slash, fiction

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sickle_girl March 6 2010, 23:29:57 UTC
Brittany, I love you. It was meant to be a 'Jazz, I love you' but you know how Brittany is.

I love the Changs, the kids, the father, the mother. The playground, the home. Which is a happy, energetic home, with toys and home made food.

I love the fact that you don't focus only on Mike and Kurt. You show us Mike's life, his family and friends (Matt speaks!)

And Mike's descriptions of how people move. Finn does move as if he were still trying to sort out how to walk. And Brittany, she's a natural dancer.

About Kurt, well, personally, I always thought he moved with such proud pace, yet, on Glee -where he has the chance to be who he is- he loos a bit insecure. He seems to have a hard time joining the dancing breaks, he's improving of course, but there is still this 'not yet' thing about his dance. Mike can fix that, for sure.

The story, the idea, and how everything is made, it has a flow, a perfect flow. So natural and beautiful, I'm loving every inch of it like the mention of 'boxes and labels'.

There is this, fake, security in being told what you are, in being put in something with a standard shape. People do feel protected by the limitations of their labels. But it cost them freedom.

But these kids, Mike specially. He dances through his life, his tempo, always changing, always adjusting.

Glee writers had given us so little in words of this character, yet so much in his moves. And you saw it, and you undestood it and you are showing us. So, thank you.

Also, the whole thing about their team actually winning made me laugh so hard. Because that's really is the only game they have won in a long time.

-And honey, you deserve all the words-

Sorry if I write anything wrong but I just want to tell you this, right now, and I can't bring myself to read it first xD )

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sickle_girl March 6 2010, 23:31:25 UTC
Ok, I saw the comment being published and read "I love you, Jazz" xDD
It was meant to say Jay.

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kitsune_tails March 6 2010, 23:59:56 UTC
Well...I'm blushing brilliantly right now. Thank you so much for the glowing review. I'm glad I hit something write with this little piece of work!! The idea really hit me after listening to music and just looking at the fandom. It's always from Kurt's POV. We know Kurt. We know his reactions and passions and motivations.

Mike...there's so much there to explore. Plus, as much as I love Kurt, I'd sooo rather date Mike. :D

And Jazz...I like that. Maybe I'll pick that up as a penname one day...

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sickle_girl March 7 2010, 00:48:57 UTC
I agree, we need more Mike! There are some things I'm still trying to understand from Kurt though.
For the little I've seen on Glee, Mike is like all the songs even written together. And his faces are great.

Mike sounds like an amazing guy, hope you find yours. I know I'll end up dating Quinn xD.

Jay/Jazz, maybe it's a sign. Because the music is in you.

There was this Italian/French song, though I think I only heard the Italian part and its Spanish translation. I was just thinking about it today. It's called Vivo per lei, I just thought it would be a song you would like ^^

Kisses! ♥

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