[FIC] Butterfly - Never Again
Title: Butterfly - Never Again
Author: kitsune_hikaru
Category: One-Shot
Pairing: JinDa, RyoPiN friendship
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, happy? T____T
Summary: For Jin to fly high, he needs a pair of ‘wings’, and a place to perch on.
Warning: Un-betaed. Really...
A/N: Sequel to Butterfly. Sorry, turns out to be longer than I expected. ( Read more... )
I love you, too ♥
The conversation between Tatsuya and Ryo was really interesting. I love how you write Tatsuya, because I think he is so like here in the real life. He is quiet, he doesn't yell anytime he is hurt. And I respect him for it. And I respect Ryo here for trying to make the things fixed.
Ah, and Jin appeared in front of Uepi's door ;_________; ♥ Such a little baka... but I'm happy because Tatsuya wouldn't have gone to Jin. Because he is the one who was left. And... just not.
AHH~ *_____________* ♥ And they made up! Oh my God, I'm so glad~~~
This part, "Give me this one night, Tat-chan. I’ll prove to you how much you mean to me...", this is my favourite part *_________*
LOL XDDDD Pi is the genius between them xDDDD Thank you, Pi ♥
And thank you again *_____* I LOVE YOU. You are my JinDa soulmate, too ♥♥♥ And you made my evening, arigatou *___* ♥
Ah, I'd like to have a better English knowledge to write in English, too ;___; I'd like to write a fic to you ♥
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really, the ryo-uepi conversation had been edited for gazillion times already... i made it pi at first, but then i thought if it was pi, the conversation would be too polite n they might drag longer... bcoz PiDa is much more friendlier than that... hehe... yeah, tat-chan is quiet but not unfriendly... i tried to give that impression here, i hope i didnt fail... tat-chan never yell, did he?? X(
haha... yerp, i made jin the one who came back, bcoz i cant imagine tatsuya who went to jin's house... he just dont have the image to go n reconcile with his ex... but jin needed tat-chan's message to make the move... ryo succeeded at that... ^^
n that last scene, i've been flicking between pi n ryo all the time, i'm sorry if it sounded weird... lol~ XD
*hugs u*
thank u sooooo much for ur lovely comment~~
i love u tooo~
u dont have to feel bad about it, i just want to write for u... n u can learn slowly too... *wink*
*hugs u again so u feel better*
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