avatar 12

[kitsune13_tam]

Title: Avatar - part 12
Author/Artist: TamLin
Setting: Final Fantasy VII - gametime(ish)
Rating: T
Summary: dang, I'm running far behind on these.  Tifa finally gets to ride the chocobo

Comments

[osirissconsort]

...Unspeakable amounts of win for White, who can appear in a little girl's body and yet still appear manly. Also, for the Portal reference, and "Grand Theft Chocobo."
Hurray for Barret, who amuses me more with his every appearance and his extreme obsession with cake, and also for Aerith, who still manages to walk that delicate line between making me want to screech "You beeeeyotch" at her, and making me admit her extreme awesome. She's impressive, I must say.
And finally, to sum up the feeling you left me with: *WAIL* BABY CLOUD AND TIFA, WHAT *HAPPENED?!* What is it with these people and misconceptions?! He thinks she hates him, and she thinks he forgot about her?! It's just--they--AUGH! SO SAD, POOR THINGS!
But because I'd like to end this review on a happy note, I've never actually heard the nickname 'sweetheart' used so wonderfully and tenderly and perfectly. I can hear Cloud's voice saying it every time, and I just end up cooing in delight.
As always you have left me in a gooey pile of glee and wailing angst with your pure awesome writing. AWESOME chapter, Miss Tamlin!

[kitsune13_tam]

heh - I like slipping the 'koibito' thing in there just as a reminder that's what SE calls Tifa. And yeah, White constantly surprises me too. He's so quiet most of the time and then he decides to freak Cloud out as calm as a cat. I always enjoy him showing up. Couldn't resist the video game references, especially not from our gamer!Barret. Aerith, one of these days I'm going to figure her out - but not anytime soon apparently so we're both in the same boat regarding her. And dang it, I just want Tifa and Cloud to clear things up too - but I suspect they're not there yet. Might need a Jessie push!