H50 fic: Hey Man, Nice Shot

Dec 16, 2012 08:47

Title: Hey Man, Nice Shot
Author: kitmerlot1213
Recipient: lou_c
Word Count: 2475
Rating: R (for some violence)
Disclaimer: This story is for fun and no profit.  I do not own any of these characters --I'm just borrowing them briefly.
Warnings: Spoilers for episode 3x10 Huaka'l Kula and some swearing
Summary: Just like in episode 3.10, Steve and Danny ( Read more... )

romance, short story, steve mcgarrett, mystery, camp fire girls, fic: hey man nice shot, action adventure, hawaii five-0, danny williams

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springwoof December 16 2012, 14:32:59 UTC
Very cool!
That final line was awesome! I like how Steve took pride in Danny's abilities, and earlier, how Grace and Steve teamed up and wore similar clothes. Too cute!

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 23:05:40 UTC
Thank, I appreciate the lovely review :)

And yes, Steve and Grace know how cool their Danno is--it's just Danny who has to be reminded :)

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eumelia December 16 2012, 14:44:57 UTC
Very adorable :)

I like Danny the Krav Maga badass :)

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 23:04:08 UTC
Thanks!

And yes, Danny is quite the badass :)

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sexycazzy December 16 2012, 15:16:39 UTC
Adorable! :)

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 23:03:26 UTC
Thanks :)

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simplyn2deep December 16 2012, 16:02:40 UTC
oo this was so cute! Danny was afraid of looking bad in front of Grace but in the end he saved the day, so to speak.

Great story!

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 23:03:02 UTC
Thanks!

Danny sometimes forgets that Grace would love him even if he were the dorkiest man on the planet--he'll always be her Danno :)

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4thoffive December 16 2012, 16:41:41 UTC
Fantastic! This story is perfection: Danny jealous of Steve, Danny being bullied as a child, Danny being badassed and Steve and Grace being proud of him. My favourite part was Brad bursting into tears - typical loud mouthed bully! I adore you and this fic.

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 23:01:06 UTC
Thank you, you are to kind!

I think Danny forgot that Grace will always be proud of him because he's her Danno--he just has to be reminded on occasion. And of course Steve loves it when his team shows that they are just as badass as he is.

And yes, bullies usually do fall apart when they're taken down a peg or two.

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