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skating on ice; onkey; pg-13

Feb 01, 2011 14:08

skating on ice
Author: kitariii
Pairing: Onew/Key
Genre: Fluff

( Just keep on gliding but don’t glide too fast, remember to control yourself because if not then you’d end up either losing your balance and falling or you’d smack straight onto the walls of the rink. There are boundaries that you just can’t pass. )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, fanfic

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rinni1905 February 1 2011, 12:25:54 UTC

Aw, the fic is really good, I have to say that I've never thought of skating that way. I even found it was boring sometimes too, but after reading this, I have to change my thinking about skating from now on. I love how sweet Jinki was with Kibum, although I don't know that if Jinki had some hidden feeling for Kibum or not, since you didn't mention it, his caring nature really make me feel warm inside, and Kibum must feel that too.

My favorite part in this fic is when Jinki asked Taemin and Minho to tie Kibum up and bring him out. I don't know why I like it, but it's rare to see a mature Jinki in some fics. People often portray him as a clueless and too carefree person to the extent that I feel annoyed. And I'm glad that someone could actually see through and write him in different light. I'm totally in love with it. Thanks for writing this even when you are sick. I always adore your 100% effort in writing each fic.

I would love to be your friend. Keke, would you mind me adding you? I've written a full bio of myself in my own LJ, you could read to know more about me.

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:45:10 UTC

Skating in it's own way is really fun, others think that it's really hard when in fact, it just easy - you just have to have the courage to stand on thin skates on ice. Just like love no? And ohh, I love it too, his unique way of sweetness - it's like those sugar free candies yet still causes cavities. orz did that make sense sorry xD

Oh I'm glad that you liked that part ^^ Honestly speaking, as much as I love Jinki's meek and adorable side, his mature side gives off a certain vibe that I love reading about.

Aww, no problem. Thanks so much for your inspiring comment bb ♥
And of course, it's okay! I want to be your friend too :3

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