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ros_fod September 21 2006, 21:58:10 UTC
I am so damn proud of you.

This is perfection.

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kita0610 September 21 2006, 22:00:42 UTC
Aw, my Fodwhich. I could not have done it without you. Which is like most things, really. :)

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ros_fod September 21 2006, 22:09:58 UTC
Heeeee. I'm glad that all my nose-holding helped. *g*

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lynnenne September 22 2006, 00:21:38 UTC
Isn't it just? It's the definitive B/A/S piece.

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carlyinrome September 21 2006, 22:01:31 UTC


You will always be my favorite. I've known you -- or, your stories, at least -- for . . . what, seven, eight years? And you still write things that make me ache, that make it so I can't breathe. I wish I could leave you good, writer-y feedback, but I can't, because I'm . . . I don't know, literally too fragile right now, because that was perfect.

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kita0610 September 22 2006, 21:25:30 UTC
You make me blush every time.

Thanks so much, honey.

((loves))

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regala_electra September 21 2006, 22:28:34 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous. And wonderful. Not only how you tell the story, the voice of the story is achingly true and the words are just so carefully chosen and lovely, but it's how much life you give to the characters. How they almost vibrate in between the words.

I loved this so much.

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kita0610 September 22 2006, 21:34:34 UTC
Thank you very much. I'm glad it worked for you. :) Thanks for letting me know.

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mallyns September 21 2006, 22:42:48 UTC
Sigh...
This makes me fall in love with your brain.
This fic is amazing and just the perfect thing I needed today. Thank you for sharing it.

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kita0610 September 22 2006, 21:35:08 UTC
You're welcome!

And thank YOU for the lovely feedback.

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marenfic September 21 2006, 22:54:26 UTC
Beautiful, and you certainly met your goal of evenly handling all the dyads and the triad.

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kita0610 September 22 2006, 21:37:25 UTC
Oh, man, thanks so much. I really appreciate it.

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