CORAZÓN Y EL ALMA -- PG

May 26, 2009 14:38

Sorry it's so late, Maria, I have been so busy and I was fighting it too -- I know you don't mind it being late, but I'm just saying! I like to be on time and this isn't.

[title] Corazón y el Alma
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] No time for that, I'm already overdue!
[rating] PG
[word count] 1504
[summary] Cook explores his musical ( Read more... )

magic rainbows & unicorn giggles, gifts

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lire_casander May 26 2009, 22:34:29 UTC
What can I say? You write me a fanastic story, complete with piano and a song I love (how did you know that? *sings the song*) and title it in Spanish? What have I done to deserve such treatment from you?

I loved this to pieces. I could go on forever talking about it, about the parts I loved and the parts I simply adored. How Cook's hands remember the keys, and how reverently he plays the piano because it's not his instrument. And I loved Andy trying to teach him to play piano when they were younger - I can totally picture a rocker wannabe!Cook in his late teens.

The last part, with them kissing and matching the lyrics was amazingly sweet and fluffy and perfect.

What is this nonsense about being late? I love receiving gifts a week after my birthday, they keep it going on and that rocks!

Thank you very much for taking some time to write this for me, and for putting obviously so much love in it. I love you too, honey. I love you too.

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kissontheneck May 27 2009, 19:45:35 UTC
Oooooh, I am sooo happy that you're happy with it. It's the best part of it all. I sat thinking, "How can I cram as much of what Mama loves into one story?" And I thought... Spanish... music... Andy (heehee!)... the song choice was a pure accident, but it's a song many people can pick out even if they don't play the piano, so it seemed logical. I'm floored that it is a song you love! So bonus for me, I guess!

I think the only thing I forgot to do was I was going to have Archie actually say something in Spanish at the end (the last lyric, perhaps), but maybe it worked out for the best because my translation skills often depend on the computer translations and you know we can't always trust it. Heehee, oh well.

Again, I'm sooo glad you liked it. And gosh! Now I'm thinking of young!Cook and young!Andy at a piano playing this silly romantic song. Ha ha ha ha. Oh goodness. XD

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lire_casander May 27 2009, 20:04:05 UTC
You nailed it, honey. Spanish+music+Andy= a happy Mama! Just so you know, I cannot play that song. I am pants at playing piano and have no music skills anyway.

Well, you know, Archie speaking in Spanish might be a *bit* different than the Spanish I speak, because his is a bit more from South America rather than from Spain. So it's okay. Though you probably know enough of his Spanish to translate anything, babe, I know there are a lot of Latin American people teaching Spanish in the States.

Of course I liked it! I LOVED IT! How could I not? Young Andy trying to teach Cook to play the iano (See, Dave, you'll never romance a girl if you can't play this song on a piano) and Cook being all rocker and alternative (Andy, I don't want to romance girls, I want to look like sex on legs and that won't happen if I'm sitting at a piano)

Uhm, yeah.

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fieryrogue May 27 2009, 20:09:13 UTC
Andy, I don't want to romance girls, I want to look like sex on legs and that won't happen if I'm sitting at a piano.

YES. THIS. XD

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lire_casander May 27 2009, 20:10:35 UTC
Now I should stop having these ridiculous plot bunnies and thoughts whispering to me that I should totally fic that...

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fieryrogue May 27 2009, 20:26:52 UTC
THIS ICON WAS MADE FOR MOMENTS LIKE THIS.

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lire_casander May 27 2009, 22:57:50 UTC
LOl at your icon, but with five different stories waiting to be written, I don't think I can fic this too!

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fieryrogue May 28 2009, 01:30:16 UTC
Ooh, okkaay.

♥ ♥ ♥

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