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Apple Crumble, Apple Tart: Part VI

Aug 29, 2013 00:09

Apple Crumble, Apple Tart (Ron/Hermione, 12+)
Author: akissinacrisis

VI: Refraction

More shouting, now with alcohol.

Index || Part I || Part II || Part III || Part IV || Part V || Part VI || Part VII || Part VIII

( With something close to a scream, she spins around to see Harry Potter leaning against the open front door. )

{fic: apple crumble apple tart}

Comments 14

lhaggy August 29 2013, 01:39:48 UTC

Aaah, that's insane! I don't see how this is ending in two chapters, I don't want it to eeend. I'm so glad you uploaded a new part, I'd been waiting for it!

akissinacrisis September 2 2013, 12:32:45 UTC

Thank you!! End it will I promise. Hopefully satisfactorily!

luna_plath August 29 2013, 01:40:08 UTC

OH MY GOD HARRY AND DAPHNEE????FLHGAO;IGFH

I kind of don't want it to happen. I am too much of a Harry/Ginny shipper at heart but I can still appreciate what's going on here with the story.

The conversation between Ron and Hermione was perfect. I loved the part where Ron says "you are guilty" because I find myself sympathizing more with his perspective. I feel like he is justified in being upset with Hermione for running away and keeping such a huge secret from him, especially considering all the dangerous things that he rightly suspected when she went missing. (I think it was logical to think of her safety/Death Eaters first. It's not like Hermione to run away with no notice.)

I wasn't expecting the Harry/Daphne, and I wasn't expecting Ron to be a history professor but I think it fits for his character. He seems to have really matured.

Can't wait to read more :D

akissinacrisis September 2 2013, 12:35:33 UTC

~evil smile~ All I can say is you know I am no h/g hater!!

Thanks for the thoughts hun. Glad you think Ron's being logical - I do, considering the timing in which she vanished.

xx

anonymous August 29 2013, 05:21:07 UTC

I casually found this story about three weeks ago, and I've been ansiously waiting for a new chapter ever since, so I'm really glad this was finally updated ! Can't believe there are only two chapters left, please hurry up with them !!!

akissinacrisis September 2 2013, 12:33:16 UTC

Thank you for reviewing! Doing my best!!

anonymous September 2 2013, 22:21:33 UTC

I'm so glad I've found this fic, I'm really enjoying your characterizations of Ron and Hermione.

Yes,’ says Ginny far too cheerily, ‘just like the adventures I used to have with Daddy.’
Ouch?

akissinacrisis September 3 2013, 13:23:23 UTC

Thanks very much!

Yeah, G is having some deja vu I think.

bitchet September 3 2013, 06:25:31 UTC

HARRY JAMES POTTER >>>>>>:(

All right, I am very much enjoying this and curious about what the next two chapters will bring. I'm really feeling for Ginny and Ron in this and I love that Ron's a History professor. I've been noticing during my re-read how often Ron's used as the exposition fairy for random historical Wizarding facts.

akissinacrisis September 3 2013, 13:24:36 UTC

Thank you!!

I read your PS reread post and enjoyed it. Would love to do the same thing but I know for a fact that I don't have the time...one day!!