my heart's on a string.

Jan 17, 2010 19:56

first 10 to 15 people get a drabble!just tiny things -- little drabbles to help get my creative juices flowing, and for you to get a little snippet of something you prompt of me ( Read more... )

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mellowdee January 18 2010, 01:06:08 UTC
OH GOOD.

02. neal/archie - first public kiss/hand holding

♥.

ETA x2 - TY for doing this! I really need to become better at writing DRABBLES. I don't know why I get all LONGWINDED~. Maybe I'll try this.

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kissesblow January 18 2010, 19:57:52 UTC
i love you more than words can say. i hope you like this!

"Hi, Neal, I don't know if you like, know me," Archie says, words fumbling over each other because his mouth clearly isn't able to keep up with his thoughts, "but, you should know by now, I am scared out of my socks by roller coasters."

Neal's hands tighten reflexively on the lap bar. The adrenaline's already searing through his veins, making his fingers shake and his ears hum, and when he feels the purr of the motor vibrate the bar, his heart jumps, just a little. "Good thing you aren't wearing any socks then, I guess," he grins.

Out of the corner of his eye, he sees Archie move his legs to the side so he can glance down at his feet, which are bare and tucked into flip flops, and then he exhales shortly and says, "That is definitely not the point, Neal! The point is that... is that..."

"See, you can't even remember your point," Neal says.

"I can't believe you forced me to get on this-stupid ride with you," Archie says under his breath.

"I didn't force you," Neal says ( ... )

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klauss_s January 19 2010, 01:36:09 UTC
OMG I THINK I LOVE YOU ♥

THIS IS SO... JDFLAJDFLÑA, YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN?

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kissesblow January 19 2010, 01:40:32 UTC
:DDD THANK YOU. LOL, I LOVE HOW AN Ñ MADE IT IN. <3 ILU.

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mellowdee January 19 2010, 03:58:37 UTC
I AM SORRY IT HAS TAKEN ME SO LONG TO COMMENT TO THIS.

BUT I LOVE THIS.

SO.

HARD.

HOW DO I FAVORITE YOUR WORDS. I WANT THEM ALL IN GREEDY HUGE GULPS.

"Plus," Cook adds, "the coaster only lasts for 6.5 seconds-and it's so, so fast, it'll go by so quickly-" And Neal has never wanted to fucking throttle Cook as much as he does right now.

LOLZED. FOREVER.

"Babe," he says, soft and sure, and Archie stares helplessly up at him, and he says, "I got you," and puts his hands overtop Archie's on the lap bar, and kisses him.

And they're off.

CLAP. FING. CLAP.

OMG.

THE BIGGEST BOLDEST FONT IN THE WORLD COULD NEVER DESCRIBE MY LOVE FOR YOU.

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kissesblow January 19 2010, 06:16:03 UTC
DO NOT EVEN APOLOGIZE. I AM JUST HAPPY THAT YOU READ THIS & LIKED IT OKAY. YOU ARE TOO MUCH FOR ME.

<333

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orochi_kitty January 20 2010, 17:23:23 UTC
LOVE I AM IN LOVE. WITH THIS. WITH YOU. <3___________<3

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kissesblow January 20 2010, 22:13:41 UTC
THE FEELING IS MUTUAL, BB GIRL. <33333 :D

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lire_casander January 21 2010, 00:14:32 UTC
Okay, so you own my heart now. I want to write like you when I grow up.

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kissesblow January 21 2010, 03:17:49 UTC
okay, best compliment ever. seriously. because i adore your writing, so, you saying that is like -- awe-inspiring, okay? <3 thank you so much.

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koishii_hime January 21 2010, 01:23:58 UTC
AWWW :DDDDDD BUT I TOTALLY LOL'D NGL. ARCHIE CHECKING HIS FEET, AND FREAKING OUT IS WAY TOO ADORABLE. AND COOK IS TERRIBLE, HAHAHA. POOR NEAL. :DDDD NEAL IS A SOFTIE THOUGH. ♥

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kissesblow January 21 2010, 03:18:14 UTC
hahaaaaa, I LOVE YOUR SMILIES. SO MUCH. <3 THANK YOU.

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