Comments | kisppiong: you don't need to be lonely [arashi rps]

waxrose in kisppiong

you don't need to be lonely [arashi rps]

Dec 03, 2011 11:50

For primroseshows, because she is lovely and hardworking.♥

you don't need to be lonely
Aiba/Jun| 嵐 RPS | PG | ~750 words

( It's raining hard for the third day in a row. )

pairing: aiba/jun, rating: pg, fandom: arashi

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waxrose December 4 2011, 11:55:28 UTC

Thank you! I can see Jun as the kind of person who might be pretty set into certain routines. Relationships involve compromise and so much talking around. I'm glad this came across as fairly realistic.

rinalin December 3 2011, 18:59:57 UTC

Awwwwww, this is lovely! And I love the picture it paints with the irritation and the grumps and it's just wonderful.

waxrose December 4 2011, 11:55:57 UTC

Thank you! Mosquito-y, muggy days are the worst. :/

r_1_ss_a December 4 2011, 02:41:27 UTC

Like the first comment, this fic screams realistic to me! <3

I can just picture the two having an exact conversation like this and that makes me smile.

Aiba being super optimistic and Jun who wants it just as much and HEARTS.

thank you for sharing this! :)

waxrose December 4 2011, 11:56:16 UTC

Thank you! I just love these two.

rhythmia December 4 2011, 06:32:55 UTC

Mmm, a delicious slice-of-life piece. Aww, I really feel for Jun here, some days it's just a lot of little stresses that add up and then you end up taking it out on people you don't mean to. I adore that both Jun and Aiba know this isn't perfect and will take work, but they're willing to put that work in. It's a realistic relationship that I want to cheer on. ^_^

♥

waxrose December 4 2011, 11:57:35 UTC

For sure. ♥ They aren't the type for all-out drama, but there's bound to be some sharp corners. Thank you, bb! :)

primroseshows April 21 2012, 06:27:06 UTC

oh god i am rereading this and my heart is just thump-thumping all over the place in a beautiful and yet miserable way, why is your writing so beautiful

Erica I don't deserve a person in you in my life; for some reason you think I'm a person worth writing amazing things like this for, and I will never understand that but o m gggg if I am not just thankful for it and amazed by it and humbled by it all the time. T_____T

This isn't me trying to start a fic/meta/writing discussion but I've always felt that when I write fic, it's just that: fic. I've never been able to capture Arashi in "real life" like you do and it is my incredible hope that one day, with much practice, I might be able to get some of this heartfelt, effortless, achey-in-just-the-right-way feeling you paint into your stories into those that I write.

UGH OKAY SO THIS WAS JUST AN EXCESSIVE AMOUNT OF EMOTION I STUFFED INTO THIS RIDICULOUS COMMENT I'M SORRY BUT NOT REALLY BC I LOVE YOU AND YOU NEED TO KNOW THAT??????????