1: I love that Aiba wrote Jun a letter and that Jun didn't notice him doing it. Because that is so sweetly, truly Aiba. I also LOVE the way you describe things. I could almost feel the heat and smell the salt.
2: Nino is such a brat but they let him live because he puts out. I love that Nino's first response is 'oh, you're awake'; for some reason that just made me laugh out loud. And then it's hot. Really hot. But it end so sweetly and I sighed with it.
3: YES. Just...yes. Everything about this is fantastic. I love the way you write Ohmiya. So much goes unsaid and that says everything. I love that Nino only went once and Ohno talks about it like it was all the time.
4: You have such a beautiful way with words and scenery and descriptions and emotions. I love the cold-clear feeling mixed with the warmth and sleepiness.
5: Oh, Aiba. I kind of died a little reading this. Nino the sulking brat and Jun taking a whack at Aiba. I can all but see this. And it is SPECTACULAR.
Whenever I get the feeling that I'm overcomplicating my writing, I just remember that I want to write about these boys being idiots and loving each other and lighting each other's underwear on fire. That makes it all better. ♥ ♥ ♥
Oh, I love these and you for writing them. You have such a lovely way with words and a real grasp of the characters. It's pretty amazing how you inspire so many emotions with in pieces this length - one alone can be funny, hot, and then wonderfully sweet (I'm so looking at the Shoneen).
It's a travesty that I've never commented on your fic before because I've always known that you're damn good at it. D: So, um, better late than never? ♥
♥ Thank you! Also, with the amount of time I spend skulking on your journal, is it all right if I take you off my Stalkerage tabs folder (yes, I do actually have one, it is so pathetic) and friend you properly?
I'm always amazed (and flattered) when people say they stalk my LJ. But seriously, your fic is incredible and I would love to get to know you better. Adding now, if you don't mind (:
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1: I love that Aiba wrote Jun a letter and that Jun didn't notice him doing it. Because that is so sweetly, truly Aiba. I also LOVE the way you describe things. I could almost feel the heat and smell the salt.
2: Nino is such a brat but they let him live because he puts out. I love that Nino's first response is 'oh, you're awake'; for some reason that just made me laugh out loud. And then it's hot. Really hot. But it end so sweetly and I sighed with it.
3: YES. Just...yes. Everything about this is fantastic. I love the way you write Ohmiya. So much goes unsaid and that says everything. I love that Nino only went once and Ohno talks about it like it was all the time.
4: You have such a beautiful way with words and scenery and descriptions and emotions. I love the cold-clear feeling mixed with the warmth and sleepiness.
5: Oh, Aiba. I kind of died a little reading this. Nino the sulking brat and Jun taking a whack at Aiba. I can all but see this. And it is SPECTACULAR.
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It's a travesty that I've never commented on your fic before because I've always known that you're damn good at it. D: So, um, better late than never? ♥
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