[fanfiction] take a breath

Oct 07, 2009 00:58

This is for yesterday and today (Tuesday), because it took too long to edit/write.

Fandom/Pairings: Kingdom Hearts; Roxas/Sora, Axel/Roxas, Demyx/Axel, Milo/Myde, Demyx/dancer!Milo, Roxas/Demyx
Rating: Light R because uh. IDK, sex.
Pre-Notes: Challenge to self? To take a breath. It'll be fun.
Disclaimer: Demyx/Roxas would probably be canon if I ( Read more... )

this is not akuroku, !fic, fandom: atlantis, fandom: kingdom hearts

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1st_eggokage October 7 2009, 20:31:39 UTC
You don't get sparkles or comments until you fix your HTML.

:|

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kisforkurama October 7 2009, 20:52:43 UTC
LJ. Sucks. Ass.

I fixed it like four times yesterday.

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1st_eggokage October 8 2009, 00:20:21 UTC
COMMENT FOR REALS THIS TIME:

What's a little pyromania and gay sex between friends?
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

Augh I love the flow of the Demyx/Axel bit. So pretty.

Myde is whispering into his ear-soft, sexy nothings that make no sense and all the sense in the world. Milo whispers back-things in languages Myde doesn't know and doesn't care to know but loves all the same.
I just. Yes. This. /purrs

He'll dance like those twelve princesses from that one story because all he wants is a prince named Milo who tells him he tastes like candied ocean and speaks in languages he doesn't understand. If he dies in the process, so what? He's practically dead already-his heart is dying. He's dying, but if he has his prince then it will be okay. It will.
CRYING. CRYING LOTS. CRYING FOREVER I HATE YOU OH GOD WHY DO THEY BREAK MY HEART EVERY TIME. /sobs

I like when you go all abstract and pretty and angsty.

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kisforkurama October 8 2009, 02:06:28 UTC
Did I make it worse because they were completely happy in the one before it. Because that was my intention. :P

I actually hate them all except T is for Tragic, so. Yeah.

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