Gift fic for yararanger!

[imifumei]

Gift fic for yararanger
From kis_my_fic2

Title: Adrift
Pairings/Characters: Yokoo focused with leanings of Yokoo/Fujigaya and background Miyata/Tamamori and Nikaido/Senga
Rating: pg-13
Warnings: slight occasional swearing
Summary: au - In space no one can hear you scream. Of boredom.
Notes: For yararanger - hopefully you will like this as I had a lovely time writing for you. I

Comments

[yararanger]

...kjhsfgndfgjgh

I started writing a comment in real-time and then like, lost track because I was totally engrossed in the fic and I just got to the end and I need to read it again because it is amazing akdjghkasjhgslfglsfa?????

so um

okay this is awesome and I will come back tomorrow when I am better able to be more coherent because ahhhh

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[yararanger]

Waugh so I inadvertently lied and don't have time to reread this with quotey comments or the extra flail that this TOTALLY DESERVES T_______T I'm so sorry, because I love this fic a lot and am looking forward to rereading it multiple times in the future. *flings all the hearts* Seriously it's wonderful and I'm really grateful for all the effort you put into its creation, anon-san ;A; ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[miquilis]

*catches all the hearts* I really do hope you liked it - sorry about the mindfuck, I didn't even realise it was one until everyone started commenting as such /)__(\ and I tried to get in as much Senga/Yokoo as possible, they are so sweet to write.

Also, l I have to ask out of curiousness, on the revels you mentioned you weren't surprised D: what gave me away?

[elindar]

oh dear god, this was so good. i don't think i've read a proper yokoo centric fic before, so this was great in that sense, too. but ajkshdjk i loved the writing style, i liked how you've written the guys, liked how the story slowly developed.
awww, yokooo~ ><

...and then how everything turned kind of upside down after one line. amazing.
i can't remember the last time a fic gave me such a mindfuck feeling! it was great. 8D

♥♥♥ good job with this~

[miquilis]

There really does need to be more Yokoo-centric everything in the world. Thank you for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed the mindfuck feeling? ♥

[mousapelli]

wow, I was really amazed by this. Your reveal in the middle caught me completely off-guard, and I can't remember the last time that happened in a fic.

this was such a good fic, excellent, excellent job.

[miquilis]

Thank you for the nice comment, I don't know why I worried the reveal was completely obvious but I suppose it's good that it still caught people off guard.

[damagea]

MINDFUCK. ♥ In a very very good way. This was GOOD and I got FEELINGS all over the place and HOMG. ;________; This has to be the first fic focused on Yokoo which I've read and I'm glad it was this. ♥♥♥♥

Thank you, author!

[miquilis]

Someone else commented about it being the first Yokoo fic they've read so I'm happy to be helping the Yokoo-centric fic shortage. I'm also happy it gave you feelings. Thank you for commenting.

[omoikkiri]

Amazing +_+

The characterization, the writing style, the pace, just everything! (...It took me like a week to even articulate this much okay lakfd XD)

I'm super biased but man I loved Kitayama in this - how he's capable enough but SUCH a lazy ass al;dkgalm XD and the 80085 omg A++++

But more to the point, YOKOO! His loneliness and hope through desperation (?) and everything, it all came across so well! And the bond he feels with the rest of the crew, and how he has... maybe not a glamorous job, but one that's important nevertheless and keeps them together ;ajklg;almaugh!

So I'd seen people talk about this fic on my t-list so I had an inkling about the "mindfuck" moment but even though I already expected something like that to happen, it was still really great? Which I think speaks to how well-written this was! Because I still felt the D: and the sudden disorientation when it got revealed...

omg sorry I'm totally rambling ~_~ suffice to say, loved it! ;A; ♥

[miquilis]

I'm rather fond of Kitayama in it too and his scene with Yokoo especially. And he really is a very capable captain but he just likes sleeping and boobs and they get in the way.

Thank you for commenting, I was not aware of t-list discussions (?) but I'm glad it didn't spoil anything too much and you could still enjoy it.