But had to comment on how nice a paragraph this is:
It should be a huge revelation, he thinks, bemused. With flashing lights and whistling bombs and several hula dancers or something, goodness knows. Instead, though, it’s been a Sunday morning of a revelation, slow and lazy and smelling of breakfast. Illuminating itself slowly so as not to startle him any more than necessary.
This is one of the greatest premises for a fic ever, and you have improved on it unbelievably by making the inside-each-others head effect more real with each day.
An exchange of fluids and pheromones, primitive motions making signs of base possession, left for the world to see.
GAH. I can absolutely see Kirk being this possessive, once he finds something he really wants.
I have to mention because I forgot elsewhere, I learned a new word because of you! LOL I employed synesthesia as a plot device and didn't even know it. XB So thank you, miss smartypants. :D
It IS a great premise, isn't it? Bless the prompter, just bless them. I just could not resist. ^^
And KIRK. Oh, Kirk. He's a Gryffindor, dude--balls to the wall, no halfway. ;)
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But had to comment on how nice a paragraph this is:
It should be a huge revelation, he thinks, bemused. With flashing lights and whistling bombs and several hula dancers or something, goodness knows. Instead, though, it’s been a Sunday morning of a revelation, slow and lazy and smelling of breakfast. Illuminating itself slowly so as not to startle him any more than necessary.
A Sunday morning of a revelation. I love that!
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An exchange of fluids and pheromones, primitive motions making signs of base possession, left for the world to see.
GAH. I can absolutely see Kirk being this possessive, once he finds something he really wants.
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It IS a great premise, isn't it? Bless the prompter, just bless them. I just could not resist. ^^
And KIRK. Oh, Kirk. He's a Gryffindor, dude--balls to the wall, no halfway. ;)
Thank you. <3
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