fic: Protector

[guardgal4eva]

John swallows hard as he faces Jim, spine straightening with ramrod postrue. The look on Jim's face is unreadable, and frankly, John's a bit afraid of the reaction. He can't lose Jim, a thought that completely startles him. In the span of time he's known the blond, Jim's become the most important person in his life, and losing him would be like

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[blcwriter]

This is wonderful, but there's a bit here that I think might have a typo/error or two, or the who's speaking part isn't clear:

The look on John’s face is still unreadable, but then he’s moving so fast John’s brain can’t comprehend it. And suddenly he’s pressed up against the wall, and Bones’ mouth is on his. “And… if this means I don’t have… to worry about you… defending yourself… all the better.” Jim pants. “I’ll… know you’re safe.” He adds. “But I do. I don’t know if you’ll come back in one piece, if you’ll be on my exam table and I can’t put you back together, or if I’m going to have to face losing the only person I have cared about since Sam died.” John growls.

Thank you for continuing this!

[guardgal4eva]

Thanks! I'll try and go back to make that a bit more clear.

[inell]

Nice to see another part! I'm glad they talked.

[guardgal4eva]

I'm almost embarrassed to admit how happy I am when I see the fact that your read and comment on my fics, because I'm absolutely in love with yours.

[lisamariedavis]

I love it! Jim's reaction was perfect! I love Doom crossover fic. Karl Urban was so freakin hot.

[joirerson]

Hee. How did you know I was hoping for more of this?

[guardgal4eva]

Magic. -nods solemnly-

[joirerson]

Indeed.

Now I was hoping for some free money too... *smirks*

[adafrog]

Lovely, thanks.