[KinKi Fic] Proper Ending

[kireira]

Another round of draft-clearing...

Disclaimer: This writing is fictional and has no commercial purpose. Characters are real persons belonging to themselves.

Pairing: KinKi Kids
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG

Summary: Pre-debut KinKi went on an outing. Guest-starred TOKIO.

[Edited 2 Nov 2008]

Comments

[jandeth]

ANOTHER ONE! YAY!!!

<> LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Exactly, of course he wouldn't mean that.

<<"It's fine, they're not looking this way,">> No now, but soon they will, if you keep that going, fu fu fu fu. *fangirl moment*

<<"I too hate to lose, you know," >> KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
I lost it there for a moment.
...and then they can just stumble to the room and continue from where they stopped...

I so DO NOT stalk you!

[kireira]

Nagase ruffled the boy's hair. "He didn't mean the rate in *that* line of product. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Exactly, of course he wouldn't mean that.
Oh, I'm glad it did get across! =) I was undecided if I should rephrase that part.

The characterization is probably waaaay off, but uh, indulgence. D: I'm sorta in the impression that Kouichi didn't start being Tsuyoshi-molester until he was much older...

I so DO NOT stalk you!
>:D

[jandeth]

yeah, I think so too.
If I remember correctly from the videos I've watched it was Tsuyo who kept trying to Kiss Koichi a lot, LOL.

...btw, Tsuyo is afraid of heights...

[kireira]

Yucks, plothole. XP Thanks for pointing it out.

I only remembered he hated roller-coasters, though yeah, I vaguely remembered hearing about that and feeling sorry for him, if I think of their concert stunts with the moving stage and all..

[lovespiral]

\:0/ for young lust love!

"Noooo!" Nagase rushed to intervene. "The best way to visit Tokyo Tower is on a romantic date, not a field trip."

Matsuoka threw him a suspicious look. "Since when do you read shoujo manga?"

This just makes me think that mabo reads a lot of shoujo himself :3

[kireira]

\:0/ for young lust love!
Whoops, that reminds me of a (past?) warning against chibi-love in love_is_kinki (?) I hope this is fine though! D:

This just makes me think that mabo reads a lot of shoujo himself :3
Lol, if we think about it, ne. I actually started this fic quite some time ago, and was quite amused at the coincidence when Yasuko to Kenji came out. =D

[kireira]

Lol, yes it is. Strive on Kou-chan!

[desecrateregret]

cuuuttteeeee (' 3 ')

[kireira]

Thanks. =D Many a plothole, though.. ^^0

[fenlings]

I can't imagine Nagase ever ruffling Koichi's hair, but otherwise the characterization is really good! But is this pre- or post-Ningen Shikkaku? Oh, Tok-kin is after, so it must be after. Strange that that kiss didn't come up then in the whole who-kisses-who-first debate.

Tsuyoshi feigning nonchalance while slowing down for Kouichi who was following him like a puppy.
LOVE LOVE LOVE.

LOL Yenta TOKIO yes plz. In character there as well, considering the amount of teasing Kinki got from everyone.

"I too hate to lose, you know"
THAT'S THE KIND OF CONTEST I CAN GET BEHIND.

[kireira]

I can't imagine Nagase ever ruffling Koichi's hair
Ah, too sugary? =O I should rewatch the rabu-rabu Nagase/Kouichi vids then and pick some other gesture. =3 *the fun kind of research!*

But is this pre- or post-Ningen Shikkaku? Oh, Tok-kin is after, so it must be after. Strange that that kiss didn't come up then in the whole who-kisses-who-first debate.
Oh, I may not know this one. Is it the part where Tsuyoshi demonstrated a pretend-kiss to a freaked-out Mabo? I haven't worked my way through all the Toki-Kin eps yet.

I haven't thought that far about the timeline actually (Ningen Shikkaku etc), so thanks for the comment!

[fenlings]

Oh, I may not know this one. Is it the part where Tsuyoshi demonstrated a pretend-kiss to a freaked-out Mabo?
Oh, I was just referring to the Ningen Shikkaku kiss (since you mentioned Toki-Kin, this fic must be set after NS). Although that pretend kiss is also awesome. ^_^V

[kireira]

Ah, I thought you were referring to a 'who-kisses-who-first debate' in Toki-Kin, did I misunderstand? =D