[KinKi Fic] Light's End Water's Edge

Nov 20, 2011 23:46

This fic has been written for lullabyeforyou for the Sendai earthquake fundraiser on arashi_on. She has given her blessing for this to be made public since some time ago, but only now I remember to do it. =X

The original was 1094 words. This version has one sentence added.

Disclaimer: This writing is fictional and has no commercial purpose. Characters are real persons ( Read more... )

fic, kinki

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kochan_addict November 20 2011, 16:13:16 UTC
I like this.
A lot!

I like your way with words and how Koichi's thoughts string themselves together.
It's beautiful.

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kireira November 21 2011, 13:34:07 UTC
Thanks. =) Whenever I try to get into Kouichi's characterization I'm always moved by how his thoughts never seem to be far from KK and Tsuyoshi, so this sort of came from there.

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slyfan November 20 2011, 17:59:09 UTC
Hisashiburi! This is v nice and poetic! Thank you!

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kireira November 21 2011, 13:35:11 UTC
Hisashiburi! Thanks for reading, glad you like it. =)

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jandeth November 20 2011, 18:07:33 UTC
It's very beautiful.

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kireira November 21 2011, 13:37:20 UTC
Ahh, I'm very happy you think so, as I was indeed trying for the "beautiful" feel. Thanks!

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miyukixrinn November 21 2011, 12:19:13 UTC
i love e way u write <3 i lik how u write Koichi & his thoughts on Tsu <3

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kireira November 21 2011, 13:42:24 UTC
Thanks! I suspect that in reality Kouichi's thoughts on Tsu would be very touching to know.

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miyukixrinn November 22 2011, 14:41:20 UTC
i think so too xD

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kireira November 22 2011, 15:11:42 UTC
Thank you for the kind words! I'm very happy that all those feelings went through to you. =)

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