[KinKi Fic] rekishi

[kireira]

Disclaimer: This writing is fictional and has no commercial purpose. Characters are real persons belonging to themselves.

Pairing: KinKi Kids
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13

Summary: A short scene based on the 'bumping into each other in the toilet' situation KinKi discussed on Shounen Club Premium.

**NOTE: This is a test piece written to be deliberately

Comments

[fishings]

Honestly? Honestly? This is so exciting to read. I read it carefully the first time, trying to make sense of it, then I reached the end, read your note, and am leaving you this comment before I read it the other way because I'm too excited. *____*

[kireira]

Thank you! *hugs* Ah, that means the explanation is still needed, I guess.

[fishings]

It's not really that it was too confusing, really. It's just that without the explanation, I would never have thought of reading it the other way. :P

[kireira]

I see! =) I'd really like to explore more of embedding style information in the story than the usual embedding story in the style. =D

[fishings]

I love it, I love it. I just read it back and forth a few times and I'm amazed again at how much the order changes the story and the implications of their words.
M(____ ____)M

[kireira]

*hugggs* The normal ordering is still not smooth though. Partly due to my stubbornness not to change some sentences that I started with. =PP