This is awkward

Jun 01, 2011 22:07

Well.

The damnedest thing happened and I feel a bit embarrassed about it too.

I've got nothing to say about Maximum Ride. All I've been doing lately is summarizing what's been happening. There's nothing to look at. There's nothing there. I have absolutely nothing to say about this book any more.

It's so ... uninteresting from a writing perspective that it's just words on paper. My cat could come up with something better for me to look at trying to bite my hand while I'm typing. I mean it's worse than uninteresting. It's bland, lifeless, it's empty. There's no effort here.

There's no love.

That's what it is.

There's no love here. The writing feels like no one cared.

Considering the rumors I've heard that there's ghost writing involved, this makes sense.

I can't analyze what's not there and I feel like I'm harping on the same things over and over again. Nothing happens. Nothing changes. And the wings piss me off. There's no new revelations with each turn of the page. No strange and weird fuck-ups or plot holes or twisting the rules of magic on the head or contradictions.

There might as well not be any words on the page. They have the same effect on me. Actually blank pages would be more interesting. I could doodle on them.










On an Egg related note, DragonCave is supposed to be getting a bunch of new features next week including teleport. I say this because some people on here are DC'vers and trades are FUN! :D

maximum ride, egg

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