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Kink Me! #30

Jun 17, 2012 19:04

Kink Me! #30
*closed to new prompts*Welcome to Kink Me! Merlin #30! :D

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Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? anonymous July 3 2012, 01:12:11 UTC

Merlin internal flailing had had nothing to do with the fact that Arthur had known all along that he was there, and everything to do with the fact that he ,i>really wasn’t a good swimmer and that swimming made him nervous. He had wanted to say No thank you I’ve eaten too much and I wouldn’t want to get a cramp or Thanks, mate, but I think Gwen was looking for me earlier and I was about to go and see what she wanted or I can’t swim well, please don’t make me, please. But all the wanting inside of him had seemed to be seeping through every one of his pores in desperation to be so close to the object of his desire, and wrapped itself around Arthur and his impossibly perfect thirteen year-old body, his cracking voice, his disarming grin, holding on for dear life. So, instead he had said,

“Yeah, okay”

He should have known. Should have known that it wasn’t a good idea. Should have known that the second his wanting had clung to Arthur, it would just drag Merlin along and possibly, probably just kill him.

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A/N: thank you for the lovely comments. Also, apologies for the weird past perfect tense, hopefully will catch up the the story soon and will write in normal simple past tense. I'm not sure why I did that, and I apologize if it causes any confusion.

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? anonymous July 3 2012, 01:44:34 UTC

Oh Merlin.
I can't wait for more.

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? alby_mangroves July 3 2012, 03:42:25 UTC

Perfect representation of that first big love, and with so much more angst for the shame Merlin sees in himself- God, I love him. This is really beautiful. Thank you for filling it!

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? anonymous July 3 2012, 06:35:12 UTC

Ohhh this is so wonderful, author!anon. So much pain for a little 13-year old boy. I really love some the imagery, too - of catching sweat on fingertips, knotted veins and muscles. I really can't wait to see how you make this happen in the pool and all, because Arthur seems surprisingly kind so far! Much love, OP

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? anonymous July 3 2012, 14:34:22 UTC

oh dear, anon. this is stunning. i love it so much. already bookmarked as one of my favourites, i can tell you. <3

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? brunettepet July 3 2012, 17:37:10 UTC

This overwhelming longing is being fed by Arthur being so perfect and nice and there and now Merlin's given in. It's got my heart in my throat.

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? katie_andrew July 4 2012, 17:53:19 UTC

I'm so in love. ♥

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? lullabylily July 5 2012, 18:27:18 UTC

Intriguing! I'd love to read more!

Re: Small Weird Love 2c/? anonymous September 17 2012, 20:06:59 UTC

I started to screm: "NO MERLIN! DON'T GO TO THE WATER NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

I have this bad habit that I get little too exited :D lol

Gotta say you are awesome

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