Twisting Legs and Burning Insides
My first spork. Well, it's not the first chapter yet. But it's a start, right?
Title: Other Mediums
Author: KorelC
Rating:
Three shadows, because of WEIRD TERMS, some serious CHEESY lines, and maximum OOCness.
Full Name (including any titles): Namine, Roxas
Full Species(es): suicidus cheesicus
Hair Color (include adjectives): First “Brown-blond hair, spiked.” but later “There is hair hanging just in her sight, red hair, flicker - brown - and his hair is blond, perhaps only in that light. It would have been brown otherwise, she knows, had he not changed.” So, even the author isn't sure, and it sure ISN'T cannon.
Eye Color (include adjectives): “He walks closer, his eyes bluer than the turquoise surrounding them.”
Unusual Markings/Colorations/Physical Features: twisting legs, burning insides, willing hands, light radiating from his face, and many, MANY more.
Special Possessions (if any): Blades. Yeah. And “Tight, plated armor, the Heartless symbol emblazoned across his chest. Silver hair, long and loose.”, weird attacks.
Origin: Castle Oblivion
Connections To Canon Characters: The looks, the coloring books.
Special Abilities: the ability to twist his legs, to fight like water, to burn on the inside, and the ability to change hair into all colours possible.
Other Annoying Traits: Lots of cheesiness, details and very, very weird comparisons.
I Say/Notes: This person obviously has a beta. Nobody can write this detailed, without any weird grammatical mistakes.