Title: Creamy Cravings, Delicious Desires
Author: Kinwad
Pairing: Brian and Justin
Rating: R
A/Ns: Don’t even ask! I don’t have a clue where it came
from or why I wrote it this way. *sneaks away*
Disclaimer: I own nothing w/QAF
“Suck it!” The whispered command pierced the stillness more forcefully than a cannon shot in a muted forest.
“No!” The determined refusal shattered all expectations of assumed acquiescence, the unwavering voice firm in its conviction.
“You know you want to. It’s all you’ve been thinking about.” The satiny voice slithered persuasively over his skin like liquid velvet, giving rise to fleshy bumps of anticipation.
“I do not. I haven’t!” The unconvincing denial echoed falsely in the silence, its deceptive tone a traitorous betrayal of the hidden craving.
“You’re the one who said how much you wanted it.” The reproachful accusation reiterated the earlier eager declaration of want and desire.
“I know I did, but...” The defensive alibi shriveled pathetically against carefully honed instincts and paled disastrously when faced with extraordinary intuitive insight.
“No more excuses! Now come over here and prove it.” The clipped directive ineffectively concealed the mutually understood nuanced undercurrent.
“Fine!” The raspy grudging acceptance and glassy eyes expertly signaled a grateful and welcome defeat.
“It’s all yours, Sunshine. Put that talented tongue and mouth to work and enjoy it.” The seductive taunt dramatically recharged the room with electricity, infusing it with its own unmistakable sexual energy.
“Mmm...” The contented moan of delight reverberated throughout the loft, a shameless admittance of decadent gratification that only occurred when savoring perfection.
“Well? Is it as good as you imagined?” The amused query punctuated the myriad of orgasmic sighs and gasps as hazel eyes lustily gazed at the swirling tongue and widely spread lips working their magic.
“Fuck! Better than I imagined! God, Brian! You can’t imagine! The taste, the texture, the feel of it against the roof of my mouth...It’s fucking amazing!” The blue eyes sparkled excitedly and the ivory skin blushed profusely with the novelty of enlightened discovery.
“Well, I have something even more amazing than your disgusting pop rock, vanilla ice cream popsicle!” The lascivious murmur sensuously teased all of Justin’s senses with its undeniable sexual communique and sent a lightning bolt of desire racing through his bones.
“Really?” The purposeful, drawn out, one-word response implicitly addressed the taunt with an equally obvious innuendo laden with a silent promise of physical gratification.
“It’s my own special version of a lush and creamy vanilla desert.” The sensual purr wantonly filled every pore of Justin’s skin, imprinting a mark of desire that could only be erased and satisfied by one man.
“There’s no end to your talent, is there? Does this special desert have a name?” The blue-eyed blond closed the distance between them, attempting to assure his validity of intent and to insure that there was no misinterpretation of his meaning.
“What do you think? What kind of an advertising genius would I be if it didn’t? I came up with it all by myself when I was working very hard one night. It’s a Cocksicle, with my own special flavor of pop rocks in it, ‘Cock Rocks,’ cause it explodes in your mouth after sucking it.” The all too familiar smirk was firmly in place, sending its erotic message to the intended recipient, making sure that it was unequivocally delivered, making sure that it was received.
“Hmm...Sounds interesting. Think I could try it out? You know, to see if I like it? I mean, it’s up against some very tough competition, Brian. I could be your personal taste tester.” The question was heavily laced with an unspoken invitation that was not to be ignored, either by design or intent.
“Oh, I’m not worried. I have a feeling you’ll like it, and I can guarantee it’ll be up enough to put the competition to shame.”
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On May 30th, 2009 07:53 am (local),
lindtti commented:
*giggles* It’s a Cocksicle, with my own special flavor of pop rocks in it, ‘Cock Rocks,’ cause it explodes in your mouth after sucking it. Right here I burst into laughter! Only Brian could come up with something like that! I love it! And it was not only funny but aslo HOT AS HELL! *grins* Thank you for making me laugh! <3
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On May 30th, 2009 02:15 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* Well, he is one of the best and brightest in the ad world! Although, I suppose he'd probably correct that by saying "...is THE best and brightest!" I'm so glad and relieved you liked it! *hugs* Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a comment!
On May 30th, 2009 08:04 am (local),
meri2ant commented:
Wonderful, as usual! Funny and really erotic. :D
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On May 30th, 2009 02:17 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
LOL...I have to be honest, I didn't know what I was going for when I wrote it, but "funny and really erotic" will do very nicely! Thanks so much for your lovely comment!
On May 30th, 2009 09:40 am (local),
trintiff commented:
You words are always such a delight! Especially when you don't have a clue where they came from!! Cock Rocks ROFL! Cindy
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On May 30th, 2009 02:19 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
Aw, thank you, my dear! I really don't have a clue where it came from! It sort of wrote itself. LOL...I know what pop rocks feels like and I'm sure Brian's version trumps that with aces! Thanks so much for taking the time to leave such a wonderful comment, hon!
On May 30th, 2009 10:23 am (local),
sandra_qaf commented:
Hah!...loved this...hot...and funny...nearly lost my pear cider whilst reading it!(I don't like losing my alcohol!)
later x
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On May 30th, 2009 02:22 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
"I don't like losing my alcohol!" *g* Neither do I! I'll make sure to put a warning up next time. Can't waste a drop, that's for sure! I'm glad you liked it, hon!
On May 30th, 2009 11:18 am (local),
duffy_60 commented:
*snerk* That was fun and adorable.
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On May 30th, 2009 02:23 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I was a little concerned about the way I actually wrote it. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment!
On May 30th, 2009 11:49 am (local),
csmars commented:
lol wow, seriously, where did you come up with this?! love it!
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On May 30th, 2009 02:26 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
"...where did you come up with this?" LOL...It turned out to be one of those "Six degrees of Kevin Bacon" games. One warped thought just dominoed into another!Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! I was a little worried that the way I wrote would have people scratching their heads (*g* maybe everyone is!)
On May 30th, 2009 12:02 pm (local),
shadownyc commented:
YUM, YUM, YUM!!! That was a delicious treat!!!!!!!!
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On May 30th, 2009 02:31 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
LOL...I know there's real pop rocks ice cream, but I guess Brian's special brand is not available to the general public...only to his very special customer, Justin!Thanks, Shadow, for taking the time to leave a comment! I really appreciate it!
On May 30th, 2009 12:49 pm (local),
we_dreamerz commented:
omg... I loved this mouth watering delight! Thank you for sharing! Liz
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On May 30th, 2009 02:32 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* I say the hell w/ Justin's vanilla pop rocks popsicle! I want some of Brian's! Thanks, Liz! I'm so glad you liked it!
On May 30th, 2009 12:57 pm (local),
snowmore commented:
:D Some times you just have to go with what pops into your head. Now, how your head got cock rocks, inquiring minds want to know! LOL Fun! And Sexy!!
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On May 30th, 2009 02:36 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
"Some times you just have to go with what pops into your head." LOL...love the play on words! To show you how delusional I am, it was an immediate leap from pop rocks to cock rocks! *g* Thanks, Robin! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I really appreciate it!
On May 30th, 2009 02:23 pm (local),
crazyevildru commented:
this was really funny and sexy!
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On May 30th, 2009 02:37 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
Hey, lady! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! *hugs*
On May 30th, 2009 03:10 pm (local),
critic75 commented:
I'm sure you could find a future in advertising.
‘Cock Rocks,’ cause it explodes in your mouth says it all, but in the meantime, please continue to titillate us with these juicy morsels.
On May 30th, 2009 04:25 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* Thanks so very much for taking the time to read this very odd fic and leaving, as always, an incredibly gracious comment. I hope you are well, my friend! *hugs*
On May 30th, 2009 03:25 pm (local),
mitakay commented:
hEE, HEE...COCK ROCKS!! tHIS WAS SO FUNNY, AND VERY HOT, VERY SEXY. l LOVED IT!
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On May 30th, 2009 04:30 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* Aw, thank you so much, hon!I'm so glad you found it funny and thought it was hot. Actually? When I was writing it, I didn't even think of hot. I was just worrying if it was going to be too "out there." Thanks, hon, for your lovely comment!
On May 30th, 2009 08:36 pm (local),
lucsmom commented:
This was so funny and adorable! I'm sure that Brian's Cocksicle will beat its competition. There's really no contest! Kim
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On May 31st, 2009 05:50 am (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* I think it would beat the competition as well! Thanks, Kim! I'm so glad you liked it! I wanted to do something a little lighter than what I've been writing lately!
On May 31st, 2009 09:29 am (local),
spike7451 commented:
Fun, sexy and a delight to read. :)
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On May 31st, 2009 05:09 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
*g* Thank you, Lyn! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
On May 31st, 2009 04:06 pm (local),
bkrave commented:
Brian. I could be your personal taste tester.” LOL i know plenty of people who would like to be that.This was funny and Hot!
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On May 31st, 2009 05:11 pm (local),
kinwad replied:
"i know plenty of people who would like to be that." LOL...You think? Tx so much for your lovely comment! I'm so glad you liked it!