Day Six: Untitled

Sep 15, 2008 08:38

Title: Untitled
Rating: PG

For: ali_wildgoose

She stood there, staring out into the courtyard through the open window of her bedroom. It was spring, two years after the end of the war. Normalcy had taken a while to come into effect within the four nations, and it was finally washing over the Fire Nation after so long.
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fic, round one

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ali_wildgoose September 15 2008, 14:45:53 UTC
Yes, something tells me Zuko and Mai's child will have NO SHORTAGE of playmates, regardless of siblings.

It's nice to see Mai being the one to have a bit of a freakout -- I'm as guilty of anyone of heaping panic on Zuko, but of course sometimes she'll have her moments as well!

Thank you for this, anonymous swap person! It was very sweet <3

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silly_izzy_me September 16 2008, 00:19:33 UTC
Mai knew that she would've been fine with just Zuko, only Zuko. The dork who held the key to her heart before she knew there even was one.

YES.

I love the idea of Mai freaking out about something! She would only do so in front of Zuko, once, maybe twice. Ever ;)

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swan2swan September 22 2008, 01:37:41 UTC
Agreeing with above--the "freaking out" part, and Zuko calling her out on that, was great.

Good concept and well-played!

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