Fic: Taste

[oroborusfox]

Title: Taste

Rating: K+

Spoilers: Everything, to be safe.

Pairings: Dawn/Xander, Dawn/Tara, Dawn/Spike, Dawn/Willow, Dawn/Faith.

Summary: Five kisses Dawn never had.

AN: I know this contains het, but it's mostly slash so I hope it's okay to post here...

Xander

Dawn kissed Xander, her first crush, when she was younger, during the height

Comments

[pene]

this was excellent. The Dawn voice works well in its analytical but charming way. I love the way the emotion of the story is slightly removed from the writing. Tara's lips going blue and the way Dawn feels removed from that, even though we feel it for her. And Faith telling her not to die. Lovely stuff.

[oroborusfox]

Thank you, I love detailed feedback!

[chickwith_stick]

Loved this. Absolutely loved it. Especially the ending. You captured Dawn's character perfectly and I loved the descriptions of the different kisses.

[oroborusfox]

Thank you, I'm glad Dawn's voice came through, for some reason she's one of my favourite characters to write.

[elviswhataguy]

That was terrific in about, well, five different ways. I love analytical-Dawn and everyone's response is captured perfectly. Very nice.

[oroborusfox]

Thank you, like I said above, I love to write her.

[frogfarm]

She thinks everyone’s wanted to kiss Faith at some point.

*wibble*

Lovely contrasts, totally in character and canon. Thank you for this!

[oroborusfox]

Thank you for commenting!

[oroborusfox]

Thank you so much.