FIC: Interruptus

[kimonkey7]

Title: Interruptus
Author: kimonkey7 
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: none (gen) Dean with implied John
SPOILERS/Timeline: pre-series
Disclaimer: Not mine. Damn it.

Summary: Dean spends some time in the car, but he's not going anywhere.

A/N: Supposed to be comment fic, but god knows I'm too verbose for that, eh? Around 1200 words. Thanks (and happy birthday) to roque_clasique

Comments

[janissa11]

Jesus, I love your writing. And this -- a fantastic prompt for an incredibly visceral piece. Beautiful. Man.

[kimonkey7]

Aw, Em...thank you. It means a lot. :)

How're your stitches doing, btw? Been thinking about you...

[kimonkey7]

Hee! :) Good to know I still have the ability to GET YOU.

*smish*

P.S. I KNOW you wanna see AC/DC the night you arrive in Australia, but DAMN, GIRL...that would be CRAZY-MAKING.

[brigid_tanner]

Makes me wanna punch John, and take the cigarettes away from Dean. Liked Dean cursing John in English and Latin. That make me laugh a little. Also made me want to keep Dean warm and fix his shoulder :) Enjoyed him using John's clothes to stay warm, and his dreams at the end. So happy to have fic from you again!

[kimonkey7]

Thanks, my dear. It was nice to fic again, actually. :)

We'll see if I can keep the muse entertained enough to stick around for a while...

[saschi212]

This is beautiful. It's awesome what you've done here--the voice so authentically Dean, and the situation set up so believably, I can totally see it happening. It gave me a lot to think about. I love the melancholy tone mixed with Dean's usual snark. I especially love the last line, the nicotine telling him he's dreaming. And I love Dean's petulant, mutinous use of John's shirt :) Thanks for sharing!!!

[kimonkey7]

You're very welcome, and thank you for your kind words. Glad the Dean-voice worked for you; it's nearly impossible for me to write him without that dichotomy of sharp and soft. It's what, I think, I love most about his complex character.

[arliss]

This is just amazing--authentic Dean voice, all the way through. Makes me want to slap John and smack some sense into him. Nice to have work from you again.

[kimonkey7]

I think it's nice to have work from me again, to, lol...

Glad the voices did you right, even if they spurred you toward fictional violent tendencies. ;)