Seeking Time

Apr 26, 2009 04:42


Title: Seeking Time
Author: Kim (Me)
Pairing: Hikaru x OC
Genre: Drama & Angst
Rating: PG
A/N: Hey everyone, I understand this is my ... *counts* ... fourth multi chapter, but I'm honestly completely blank with the other ones and will most likely be finishing them off when summer comes. I'll be focusing on this fic because I already have sufficient amounts of writing that I've done for it and all I need are comments and criticism is welcome. Enjoy the preview!



Tick tock tick tock
What is it? I don't know. Is that my heart? No, it can't be.
Tick tock tick tock
It's too much; The sound rings in my ears.
Tick tock tick tock
Am I dreaming? No, I can't be. I'm dead. Dreaming is for humans. But, I am human.
Tick tock tick tock
My body hurts, my head pounds. There's another sound, but I can't hear it. I refuse to hear it. I shouldn't hear it. I'm dead. Voices, I hate it. It's too much.
"Is she dead?" Mom. How I want to shout it out to her. Yes, I'm dead! But I can't see her, I can't see anything. My eyes burn. I don't know what to do, I dont know. Am I really dead? If not, then why is it so dark?
The voices slowly fade and my mother's distraught voice is only but a faint sound in the distance.
Tick tock tick tock...
Nurses and doctors hustled and bustled, new patients coming in all the time. But this was different, she could feel it. She could taste the feverish sweat, the result of anxiety and anger. She could feel and touch the bed she has been placed on. Although it was comfortable, it was not her own. She could smell the rubbing alcohol and hand sanitizers, stinging her nose. Tubes we placed in her nostrils and she smelt fresh, but artifcial, air. She could hear voices quietly murmuring, but there was something different. Why was everything so dark? She tried to blink but she found she wasn't able to. She lifted a pale hand and felt her face. There were bandages, covering small cuts and bruises which will heal overtime. But there was another bandage, one that circled her head and covered her eyes. My eyes.
END

status: ongoing, pairing type: oc, type: multi chapter, member: hikaru yaotome, !fanfic preview

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