Like Fools: Chapter Seven

[kimberry531]

Title: Like Fools
Author: Kimberry531/Clandestinelle (same person)
Rating: R
Pairing: Al/Scorpius
Word Count: 52,207 total; ~5k this chapter.
Summary: In the middle of his quest to find and master the Elder Wand which his father didn’t want, Al finds his family in the midst of a second Wizarding war. While in hiding, Al finds himself struggling to

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[chocolatonfire]

I WROTE A LONG COMMENT, AND LJ ATE IT.

Argh... Comment take two...

My favorite bit:
“How is it gross? They’re just clothes.”

“The Blacks were twisted people. Merlin only knows what this suit has seen.”

“It’s probably been thrown in a pile on the floor a good many times so its owner could have a deviant shag,” Albus agreed.

I instantly thought of Sirius and Remus (because honestly, they're practically canon). Oh the things this fic does to my brain.

I love the boys in this fic, I really do (and I'm so happy that they finally got some, because they may not know it, but THEY BELONG TOGETHER). I seriously hope they don't go and get all awkward on each other and instead opt for more action.

That being said, what really just makes this fic for me, are all the background characters and their interactions. I love Rose when she says that as long as nothing the boys are doing will impact her negativly in any way, that they can carry on. Lily and Roxanne's banter, as well as Louis and Hugo, it's all just so spot on for what kids would say or do. It just adds layers to the story, and makes it even more awesome (because Al and Scorpius on their own are pretty damn awesome to begin with).

This was an excellent installment, and I can't wait for the next bit!

[kimberry531]

THANK YOU FOR THE LONG COMMMEEENTTTTT. i so appreciate it.

<3