Aug 13, 2010 19:06
Even I know this is cruel but it's the kind of person I am lol.
Hoping to get the final Chapter posted over the next few weeks. And it will be this time as I've finally got some decent ideas for the ending lol.
Honestly the others were shite. Hope this version of about twenty odd rewrites will be good enough.
“Miranda I’ve changed, I could treat you so much better than her” he said. Miranda just continued to look at him with hatred. He took a chance and stepped forward placing his hands on each of her biceps. “I’ve changed honey” he said looking deeply into her eyes and slowly rubbing his strong, gentle hands up and down her arms.
Andrea stood in shock watching this exchange. One he had the nerve to touch Miranda and again and secondly Miranda was letting him and looking just as deeply into his eyes. She stood frozen, her heart thudding in her chest. She felt sick, but like watching a car crash, she couldn’t turn away.
Fucking hell I am mean lol.
Please note this is unbeta'd so it may differ in the final piece.
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