Harry Potter - Bellatrix/Lily - Perfection

Jul 21, 2015 17:13

Title: Perfection
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Bellatrix/Lily
Word Count: 193
Rating: PG
Warning: character death
Challenge/Prompt: femslash100, challenge 468: elation
Challenge/Prompt: fluffyfrolicker ficathon, prompt: She has never been prettier, as now she's lying there dying on the floor for irrlichtertanz
Challenge/Prompt: 100_women - obsession

Bellatrix can't hold back the tears of happiness as she sees Lily on the floor. )

genre: drama, challenge: 100women, challenge: ficathon, character: bellatrix lestrange, character: lily evans, pair: bellatrix/lily, challenge: femslash100

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vitiate_me July 21 2015, 22:34:24 UTC
So dark. So perfect.

This was great.

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killing_kurare July 22 2015, 05:54:40 UTC
Thank you <3

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irrlichtertanz July 22 2015, 10:23:48 UTC
Oh my god! I love you! I really, really love you!!
To be honest, I actually thought about Bellatrix, when I posted this prompt, but I didn't want to give such a strong frame. I wanted it to be used for whatever would come from imagination, by reading this prompt.

And you come along and write about Bellatrix!! I mean, could you read my mind or something like that?! <3 <3 <3

Oh and this is so great and ... for me, it's just pure perfection!

"She has never seen anything this perfect.
Silken hair red as blood frames a perfect face, as pale as it has never been.
Emerald eyes, wide open, never to be closed again.
Full, voluptuous lips parted in a never fading sigh."

These metaphers you used are so, so wonderful and dark and so like Bellatrix.

And the ending, uh, fantastic! It's exactly what I hoped for!

Thanks, for this amazing fill of my prompt!

A lot of love and a big thank you to you.

Kate <3

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killing_kurare July 24 2015, 08:56:15 UTC
Haha, I love you too :-****
Hun, you DID prompt the pair Bellatrix/Lily :'D That's how I came up with it, and that is what gave me enough inspiration do fill the prompt :D
Because I feel the same way about this, Bellatrix fits these lines perfectly *-*
And it was so much fun to write it!!

I am sooooo gladyou like it :D Thanks for these kind words, they make me really happy <3 <3 <3

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irrlichtertanz July 24 2015, 09:55:16 UTC
Gott bin ich blöd! >.<
Now you can see, how insane I am. :D
I totally forgot that I PROMPTED them both.

But anyway, I really do love this little piece of art!

Thank you so much for writing this!! <3 <3 <3

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swan_secrets July 25 2015, 09:15:07 UTC
Your writing is so pretty in this, it goes so well with the darkness of it. Such a fantastic, twisted look at Bellatrix. Bravo!

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killing_kurare July 27 2015, 09:53:52 UTC
Thank you :D I really love Bellatrix as a character, and this prompt literally screamed at me <3
Glad you like it!!

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salmon_pink July 26 2015, 20:10:11 UTC
God, this is so perfectly twisted and uncomfortable and poetic and incredible! ♥

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killing_kurare July 27 2015, 09:53:02 UTC
Thank you!! So glad you like it :D I really loved that prompt <3

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