Title: Perfection
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Bellatrix/Lily
Word Count: 193
Rating: PG
Warning: character death
Challenge/Prompt:
femslash100, challenge 468: elation
Challenge/Prompt:
fluffyfrolicker ficathon, prompt: She has never been prettier, as now she's lying there dying on the floor for
irrlichtertanzChallenge/Prompt:
100_women - obsession
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Bellatrix can't hold back the tears of happiness as she sees Lily on the floor. )
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This was great.
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To be honest, I actually thought about Bellatrix, when I posted this prompt, but I didn't want to give such a strong frame. I wanted it to be used for whatever would come from imagination, by reading this prompt.
And you come along and write about Bellatrix!! I mean, could you read my mind or something like that?! <3 <3 <3
Oh and this is so great and ... for me, it's just pure perfection!
"She has never seen anything this perfect.
Silken hair red as blood frames a perfect face, as pale as it has never been.
Emerald eyes, wide open, never to be closed again.
Full, voluptuous lips parted in a never fading sigh."
These metaphers you used are so, so wonderful and dark and so like Bellatrix.
And the ending, uh, fantastic! It's exactly what I hoped for!
Thanks, for this amazing fill of my prompt!
A lot of love and a big thank you to you.
Kate <3
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Hun, you DID prompt the pair Bellatrix/Lily :'D That's how I came up with it, and that is what gave me enough inspiration do fill the prompt :D
Because I feel the same way about this, Bellatrix fits these lines perfectly *-*
And it was so much fun to write it!!
I am sooooo gladyou like it :D Thanks for these kind words, they make me really happy <3 <3 <3
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Now you can see, how insane I am. :D
I totally forgot that I PROMPTED them both.
But anyway, I really do love this little piece of art!
Thank you so much for writing this!! <3 <3 <3
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Glad you like it!!
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