this is so sad and painful...to be in a relationship where there are just walls and pain and silent screams. yeah, love is meant to be verbalized just so you know where you stand.
The first YunChun I've read I a long while... and it hurts so much and so good.
I love how you write it, the words, the descriptions... detailed and yet abstract. You focus on the particulars that draw the entirety and, it's beautiful.
I love how you depict Yoochun, his hunger for love. I love how Yunho is composed and calm, but his love is there and it runs like water, without ceasing. Unlike the tide that is Yoochun. Thanks for the fic ^^ Please keep up!
Oh my goodness! Thank you for your kind words! You don't know how much this means to me.
I do tend to write emotions more than storylines nowadays and I'm glad some of it got through. I was worried about the cohesiveness since the scenes are pretty sporadic.
I never thought of that analogy but it does fit! The line "you only love me as much as you hate me" is really the catalyst for the whole thing and I just wanted something to revolve around it. I was thinking about how hate and love are too synonymous; they contain the same passion. Also, hate is not the enemy but apathy.
Anyway, thank you for your words. I truly, from the bottom of my heart appreciate them!
okay. i had to reread it twice. it was good. like really good. i like how you equip your words, using them to form incredible sentences and ideas that are completely unique, where you'd have to stop and visualize, like oh, yes, i see it.
and i suppose yunho has to take a step back, and to shed the toughness, and let yc forget about the love in the pain that he's learnt to settle for. but oh, so good. really! *rolls about in creys*
Oh, your comment makes me happy :3 Very much indeed.
I have no idea with this fic and it truly astounds me when people give inputs about what the relationship is because frankly even I just let the beast out. . .
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Thanks for reading :)
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I love how you write it, the words, the descriptions... detailed and yet abstract. You focus on the particulars that draw the entirety and, it's beautiful.
I love how you depict Yoochun, his hunger for love. I love how Yunho is composed and calm, but his love is there and it runs like water, without ceasing. Unlike the tide that is Yoochun.
Thanks for the fic ^^ Please keep up!
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I do tend to write emotions more than storylines nowadays and I'm glad some of it got through. I was worried about the cohesiveness since the scenes are pretty sporadic.
I never thought of that analogy but it does fit! The line "you only love me as much as you hate me" is really the catalyst for the whole thing and I just wanted something to revolve around it. I was thinking about how hate and love are too synonymous; they contain the same passion. Also, hate is not the enemy but apathy.
Anyway, thank you for your words. I truly, from the bottom of my heart appreciate them!
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and i suppose yunho has to take a step back, and to shed the toughness, and let yc forget about the love in the pain that he's learnt to settle for. but oh, so good. really!
*rolls about in creys*
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I have no idea with this fic and it truly astounds me when people give inputs about what the relationship is because frankly even I just let the beast out. . .
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can i pet come closer to pat it?
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give a sacrifice first before patting! :p
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