we've lost meaning a long time ago but why are we still holding on?

Jul 27, 2013 22:26

Pairing: Yunho/Yoochun
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: pg-13
Summary: Not all fairytales are happily-ever-afters.

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killboredom July 29 2013, 03:33:15 UTC
Thanks dear. I miss them too

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roughmetal2 July 28 2013, 15:40:17 UTC
this is so sad and painful...to be in a relationship where there are just walls and pain and silent screams. yeah, love is meant to be verbalized just so you know where you stand.

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killboredom July 29 2013, 03:34:42 UTC
True, but sadly sometimes it's just so hard to speak up. . .

Thanks for reading :)

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delsogno July 28 2013, 18:08:53 UTC
The first YunChun I've read I a long while... and it hurts so much and so good.

I love how you write it, the words, the descriptions... detailed and yet abstract. You focus on the particulars that draw the entirety and, it's beautiful.

I love how you depict Yoochun, his hunger for love. I love how Yunho is composed and calm, but his love is there and it runs like water, without ceasing. Unlike the tide that is Yoochun.
Thanks for the fic ^^ Please keep up!

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killboredom July 29 2013, 03:52:29 UTC
Oh my goodness! Thank you for your kind words! You don't know how much this means to me.

I do tend to write emotions more than storylines nowadays and I'm glad some of it got through. I was worried about the cohesiveness since the scenes are pretty sporadic.

I never thought of that analogy but it does fit! The line "you only love me as much as you hate me" is really the catalyst for the whole thing and I just wanted something to revolve around it. I was thinking about how hate and love are too synonymous; they contain the same passion. Also, hate is not the enemy but apathy.

Anyway, thank you for your words. I truly, from the bottom of my heart appreciate them!

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lemonzzzbby July 29 2013, 06:56:07 UTC
I love this so much. I love the raw emotions and the dynamics of their relationship. It's so beautifully written and so amazing. Thank you ~

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killboredom July 30 2013, 00:49:19 UTC
Thank you for that :3

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countingcr0ws August 8 2013, 05:04:59 UTC
okay. i had to reread it twice. it was good. like really good. i like how you equip your words, using them to form incredible sentences and ideas that are completely unique, where you'd have to stop and visualize, like oh, yes, i see it.

and i suppose yunho has to take a step back, and to shed the toughness, and let yc forget about the love in the pain that he's learnt to settle for. but oh, so good. really!
*rolls about in creys*

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killboredom August 8 2013, 05:12:01 UTC
Oh, your comment makes me happy :3 Very much indeed.

I have no idea with this fic and it truly astounds me when people give inputs about what the relationship is because frankly even I just let the beast out. . .

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countingcr0ws August 8 2013, 05:33:59 UTC
oh i like that beast a lot. *peers at you innocently*
can i pet come closer to pat it?

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killboredom August 8 2013, 05:59:13 UTC
that sounded kinky in my head *bad brain, bad* haha.

give a sacrifice first before patting! :p

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