Reviews!!
...posted here so that I can have them here! Why not! It is possible that they are more permanent this way
Let's see if this works....
Devonne
2010-01-28 . chapter 5
Hey, at least you have a paying job. Some of us got laid off months ago and still can't find anything so we read fanfic in between re-writing our resumes. Anyway, the fourth chapter flows much better now after your editing, and I'm enjoying Sasuke's adventures so far. He doesn't seem to have realized yet that his body currently has a 'normal' chakra system; it could be years before he develops it enough to work the way he remembers it should. And I can't wait to see the exercise program he tries to implement to get back into physical shape! (If showing stuff like that that fits into your story of course.) In regard to you journalling, you can if you want; you might want to enable anonymous posting in case some of your readers don't belong to whichever one you use. Your story's coming along great so far and I can't wait to read more of it!
Devonne
2010-01-17 . chapter 3
Huh. Sounds like his mind has been 'downloaded' into a clone body that's never been used and wasn't grown to age 16 yet before being put into suspended animation. And why was he able to use his sharingan in the first chapter, but now it's blocked? This is all making me very curious! Please post the next chapter when you have time!
Tia'RaHu
2010-01-13 . chapter 2
Hm. Interesting. I definitely want to read more of it. Otherwise the only opinion I have on the first two chapters is that technically they're pretty well written. So far the concept is very intriguing though, and it looks promising.
negai
2010-01-10 . chapter 1
Sounds really intriguing :) I'd love to see where your plot is headed.
karehiro
2010-01-09 . chapter 1
Wow, you have GOT to continue this! You had a great summary but reading the first chapter itself was definitely a treat. You are a very skilled writer and I must say that you have an original and attention-grabbing premise with a continuation from the canon chapters. The way you describe the setting from the kage summit to how Sasuke finds himself in that lab listening to that Shika and Cho look-alike really sets the mood, and I can't help but thinking this is an authentic (and thus rare) portrayal of Sasuke as a character which is definitely a relief from all the OOC on fanfiction net.
I'm really curious as to what happened to Sasuke's body that they did, what the differences are between these Shika+Cho from the past, and who exactly that woman Sasuke saw before awakening in that lab. Hope you continue soon!
...Awesome! And now:
Review responses! ^^
karehiro - Thank you so much for your kind review! Your compliments encouraged me to continue this, and I have to admit, I've been having a blast ^_^ All three of your questions are astute and right on the mark, and I promise you, all will be answered in time _
negai - I am glad you are intrigued! So am I! ^^
Tia'RaHu - Thank you for your compliment! One of the things I am enjoying most about this is honing my technique. Let me know if anything doesn't read right to you. I welcome criticism!
Devonne - You know, you make a good point about the job ... In any case, I was transferred a few weeks ago and my life has improved greatly since! Though, I guarantee you I will be in the same position as yourself when my contract runs out this fall. *trembles* I will enjoy the good times while I can, anyway...
Also, your guess about the clone body is certainly in the ballpark! But, the truth is slightly more complex :D And don't worry, physical conditioning and training are in the future as well! (...keep reading? XD) Lastly, let me know if the fanfic blog doesn't enable anonymous posting - I am far less computer savvy than I may seem...
OKAY. I WILL GO WRITE NOW.
....XD
Let's see if this works....
Devonne
2010-01-28 . chapter 5
Hey, at least you have a paying job. Some of us got laid off months ago and still can't find anything so we read fanfic in between re-writing our resumes. Anyway, the fourth chapter flows much better now after your editing, and I'm enjoying Sasuke's adventures so far. He doesn't seem to have realized yet that his body currently has a 'normal' chakra system; it could be years before he develops it enough to work the way he remembers it should. And I can't wait to see the exercise program he tries to implement to get back into physical shape! (If showing stuff like that that fits into your story of course.) In regard to you journalling, you can if you want; you might want to enable anonymous posting in case some of your readers don't belong to whichever one you use. Your story's coming along great so far and I can't wait to read more of it!
Devonne
2010-01-17 . chapter 3
Huh. Sounds like his mind has been 'downloaded' into a clone body that's never been used and wasn't grown to age 16 yet before being put into suspended animation. And why was he able to use his sharingan in the first chapter, but now it's blocked? This is all making me very curious! Please post the next chapter when you have time!
Tia'RaHu
2010-01-13 . chapter 2
Hm. Interesting. I definitely want to read more of it. Otherwise the only opinion I have on the first two chapters is that technically they're pretty well written. So far the concept is very intriguing though, and it looks promising.
negai
2010-01-10 . chapter 1
Sounds really intriguing :) I'd love to see where your plot is headed.
karehiro
2010-01-09 . chapter 1
Wow, you have GOT to continue this! You had a great summary but reading the first chapter itself was definitely a treat. You are a very skilled writer and I must say that you have an original and attention-grabbing premise with a continuation from the canon chapters. The way you describe the setting from the kage summit to how Sasuke finds himself in that lab listening to that Shika and Cho look-alike really sets the mood, and I can't help but thinking this is an authentic (and thus rare) portrayal of Sasuke as a character which is definitely a relief from all the OOC on fanfiction net.
I'm really curious as to what happened to Sasuke's body that they did, what the differences are between these Shika+Cho from the past, and who exactly that woman Sasuke saw before awakening in that lab. Hope you continue soon!
...Awesome! And now:
Review responses! ^^
karehiro - Thank you so much for your kind review! Your compliments encouraged me to continue this, and I have to admit, I've been having a blast ^_^ All three of your questions are astute and right on the mark, and I promise you, all will be answered in time _
negai - I am glad you are intrigued! So am I! ^^
Tia'RaHu - Thank you for your compliment! One of the things I am enjoying most about this is honing my technique. Let me know if anything doesn't read right to you. I welcome criticism!
Devonne - You know, you make a good point about the job ... In any case, I was transferred a few weeks ago and my life has improved greatly since! Though, I guarantee you I will be in the same position as yourself when my contract runs out this fall. *trembles* I will enjoy the good times while I can, anyway...
Also, your guess about the clone body is certainly in the ballpark! But, the truth is slightly more complex :D And don't worry, physical conditioning and training are in the future as well! (...keep reading? XD) Lastly, let me know if the fanfic blog doesn't enable anonymous posting - I am far less computer savvy than I may seem...
OKAY. I WILL GO WRITE NOW.
....XD