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kieyra

Fic: Remix (Chapter Two)

Jul 06, 2005 10:23

Title: Remix
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Rating: NC17
Summary: Veronica, Eli and Logan; high school's long over, but everyone's still got secrets.
Warn: General deviance. Dark themes. Author meets futurefic format, gets it liquored up, and takes advantage.

( Chapter Two )

Comments 75

spectralbovine July 6 2005, 08:54:36 UTC

Oh. Heh. For a second, I thought this was a "Fic Remix." Like, you'd taken one of your old fics and remixed it. I'm not sure how that would work, really. Add some breakbeats, a nice bass line, I don't know.

kieyra July 6 2005, 09:00:07 UTC

Heh.

What it really comes down to is that I suck at coming up with titles.

irishcream2007 July 6 2005, 09:14:12 UTC

Awesome, seriously.

I could totally see V&L ending up just like...fucked up and willing to do whatever.

And Weevil? Loved him here.

kieyra July 6 2005, 09:22:25 UTC

Hey, thanks a lot, glad you liked it. I'm kind of nervous about this one, futurefic is not something I've messed with much. :)

dissident July 6 2005, 09:36:39 UTC

I'm not giggling lecherously, i swear.

As per usual, i love the fic. This is the sequel to Days of the Phoenix right? There will be more....right?

I'm so greedy. I'm sorry.

kieyra July 6 2005, 09:41:52 UTC

It's not really a sequel, no. I can see why a couple of the details might seem that way, though. Glad you liked it.

More? That was 11,000 words, dude! And I write so freaking slow.

dissident July 6 2005, 10:53:23 UTC

*dejected* So Phoenix is officially.....over?

11,000 words! It just seems so fast when i read long stories that are GOOD, it's so unfair.

kieyra July 6 2005, 11:28:17 UTC

Well...the only additional ideas I had for DOTP were a one-shot porn piece, and other than that...I don't know. I'll give it some thought. :)

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0_makebelieve_0 July 6 2005, 10:01:12 UTC

that amazing, i was hooked to it from the first moment (its the best idea to open it in the way you did!!)

after weevil asked if they were married i was waiting the whole fic to hear one of them saying that they were, just not to each other, hehe. but i love the way you made it, its even better!!!

one of the best fics that i read!!

kieyra July 6 2005, 10:15:34 UTC

Glad you liked it,thanks for coming by to comment! :)

havemy_heart July 6 2005, 10:18:08 UTC

I liked this a lot more than I was expecting to. I'm kind of sad that Veronica & Logan are still so messed up after all this time, but I'm glad that Logan got to talk to someone. And I think it's awesome that Logan put out a hit on Aaron! This is really well-done, and I love fics from Weevil's perspective.

kieyra July 6 2005, 11:12:22 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it--especially if you were apprehensive at first. I didn't want to give too much away in the summary/pairing.

Thanks a lot for the feedback.