That was so adorable! Total control, were it possible, would not allow for unexpected occurrences, also known as surprises. Not all of them are unpleasant. I loved that bit! Actually, all of it. I know its been said, but I have to second that ... the characterization and dialogue were really great. :D
That horrible depression of failure, plus knowing you can do it better, can be so crushing. You've captured it so perfect in Kirk here. AND SPOCK! He didn't just challenge Kirk! He returned the provoking favor! YUS! And hawt kisses are HAWT. And thank you, thank you, THANK YOU FOR A SMUG SPOCK. Smug!Spock amuses me to no end.
Fantabulous work. I am most cheered now and I'm try harder to do better in writing. Again, I thank you. So very much. ♥
LOL! I had the story in my mind the moment I read your prompt. I was looking for something relatively short to give me a little change of pace and your prompt was just perfect. :D
Spock is a sneaky smug bastard when he wants to be. ;)
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Characterization, dialogue, plotting, pace - all of it.
Bravo.
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Total control, were it possible, would not allow for unexpected occurrences, also known as surprises. Not all of them are unpleasant.
I loved that bit! Actually, all of it. I know its been said, but I have to second that ... the characterization and dialogue were really great. :D
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That was gooooood Oh, my! I loved every moment of that, just perfect!
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:D Thanks!
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That horrible depression of failure, plus knowing you can do it better, can be so crushing. You've captured it so perfect in Kirk here. AND SPOCK! He didn't just challenge Kirk! He returned the provoking favor! YUS! And hawt kisses are HAWT. And thank you, thank you, THANK YOU FOR A SMUG SPOCK. Smug!Spock amuses me to no end.
Fantabulous work. I am most cheered now and I'm try harder to do better in writing. Again, I thank you. So very much. ♥
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Spock is a sneaky smug bastard when he wants to be. ;)
I'm very, very happy you liked it. :D
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