Sora fanfic rant (MAJOR BBS SPOILERS ).

[omamus]

Dear Author

I give you credit for good spelling and grammar and a unique idea about all four Sora clone's meeting however there are a few problems.

1 Roxas and Xion would not whine about Sora absorbing them.

2 Ventus and Vanitas would not team up. Vanitas would be trying to rip everyones throats out.

3 Why were they fighting each other?

In short: good concept, bad execution.
On the plus side there was no smut.

Thank you.