Apr 09, 2009 22:11
I love honest advertising, really.
it’s has the basic timeline of the series, but through my own character who everyone wants to date, Miki. Just so you know, I won’t write more until you review. Hope you enjoy!
But basically I think KH sues are rather...eh...cut-and-dry these days. There is no more je ne sais quois in our Sues. :(
It's just the author sandwiched into the story with everyone fawning over her. And put...An Axel/Roxas filter in with Humor/Romance despite the summary screaming NO YAOI.
Cmon', KH fandom. You got a girl named Xion as a canon character. Do you seriously want canon one-upping your Sues in being special? :B At least make em' entertaining. Over-the-top. Or sparkly. Dazzling. Whatever is trendy with teens these days with the vampires and the love shields.
mary sue,
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