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Dear fanauthor,
It's great that you're writing Lexaeus, hell it's great you even remember he exists let alone using him as a primary character in your fanfiction.
However, your prose appears to be horrendous a shade purple and reeks of bad romance novels. If you hadn't told me outright what characters you were writing I wouldn't have the foggiest who this was about other than being in the KH section of the pit.
The repeated insistence of nobodies having the capacity to love is painful and I'm not even going to touch the descriptions of how 'beautiful' Vexen and his 'silken locks' are or the concept of naming a child a combination of their true names.
Much disfondness,
Schrodinger
It's great that you're writing Lexaeus, hell it's great you even remember he exists let alone using him as a primary character in your fanfiction.
However, your prose appears to be horrendous a shade purple and reeks of bad romance novels. If you hadn't told me outright what characters you were writing I wouldn't have the foggiest who this was about other than being in the KH section of the pit.
The repeated insistence of nobodies having the capacity to love is painful and I'm not even going to touch the descriptions of how 'beautiful' Vexen and his 'silken locks' are or the concept of naming a child a combination of their true names.
Much disfondness,
Schrodinger