If anyone's feeling particularly masochistic, here. Have gift.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3835698/1/Super_SERCET_Organization_Slumber_PAAARTY_XD "0.o"? Not dialogue. Roxas? Does not care whether or not you've "got da’ PoPo on [your] tail!!” Lexaeus? not A YAOI on steroids. Marluxia? DOES NOT LIEK SHOPPIN'. Well, not based solely on his hair. Author's notes? Turn-off. Especially when they're "(you have [x] to thank for that brilliant insanely random but funny idea. +high fives [x]+)". Oh, and, uh, Saïx? Not the Sheriff of Rottingham (or anywhere else, for that matter). Or the "seed of the demon". Wrong imagery. And, er, what are "man cramps"?
And please, don't call yourself a "fantastic author". Especially in your summary.
Also, Saïx's other.
Bill Saïx Sikes (The sociopathic bastard from Oliver who likes to sing songs about his name).
Search your feelings, you know it to be true.