*twitch*
Dear fanbrat,
I know any plot idea can be good when it's well done. But this? No. Let's see... Sora has ADD, Leon is his brother, Cloud is his cousin and they've just moved to Destiny Islands. Uh, no. This looks like yet another HSAU with an attempt at a twist. The only saving grace it has is that Leon seems to be in character.
No love,
Me
And here I beg.
I have this OC who is the antagonist in the story. He's a Nobody, but before he lost his heart he was a bully who gave Sora and Riku a lot of trouble. There was very little shift in his personality from Other to Nobody and he can manipulate dreams and keep other Nobodies from portaling. He's a dick and a homophobe and he honestly thinks that if a guy is pretty, like Riku, then he's weak. His Nobody type is one I've made up, called White Knight, and he uses a sword and shield. My problem is that he needs a name (or actually two, since I need to name the Nobody and the Other. I've been using other names as I work on the story, but now I'm stuck. I can't post any more chapter 'til I name him. Help? Suggestions? Ideas? And if anything in his description makes him seem stuish, tell me.
I know any plot idea can be good when it's well done. But this? No. Let's see... Sora has ADD, Leon is his brother, Cloud is his cousin and they've just moved to Destiny Islands. Uh, no. This looks like yet another HSAU with an attempt at a twist. The only saving grace it has is that Leon seems to be in character.
No love,
Me
And here I beg.
I have this OC who is the antagonist in the story. He's a Nobody, but before he lost his heart he was a bully who gave Sora and Riku a lot of trouble. There was very little shift in his personality from Other to Nobody and he can manipulate dreams and keep other Nobodies from portaling. He's a dick and a homophobe and he honestly thinks that if a guy is pretty, like Riku, then he's weak. His Nobody type is one I've made up, called White Knight, and he uses a sword and shield. My problem is that he needs a name (or actually two, since I need to name the Nobody and the Other. I've been using other names as I work on the story, but now I'm stuck. I can't post any more chapter 'til I name him. Help? Suggestions? Ideas? And if anything in his description makes him seem stuish, tell me.