Your titles.
Make sure they make sense. For example, notice mistakes like the ones here.
The fight between Sora and Number X was a memorable way for goodbye.
Who was he, Fuijin? Brother...A long time ago, Fuu had a brother...Slight OCness for Seifer's gang.
Yay! Chapter 10 is finally up! R&R please!
Don't go ADD on us, don't confuse acrynoms (however it's spelled), and make sure your summary is actually a summary.