Another late fic filled night, Another annoyed rant.
Dear fic writter; I appluad you for writting Larxel. Really, I do. I love that pairing to death, and your story did make me smile. It was nice, except weepy!Larxene isn't my favourite. But that's okay, because she had a reason and was IC and blah blah blah.
But then you had to go and use the "He made me feel like I had a heart" line.
You fail. Got it memorized? *shot dead, twice. for the irony thing.*
Don't use that line. Its bad enough that everyone and their mom feels like they had a heart because of some lamer. We don't need Larxene joining that league.
Seriously, what's with spamming Axel's lines? Sure, he's a great character, and its fun to say "Something with a capital Something" and spout one of his memory lines. But not in your stories.
Thank you, enjoy a bottle of bleachy goodness, and try again later.
~Alice.
But then you had to go and use the "He made me feel like I had a heart" line.
You fail. Got it memorized? *shot dead, twice. for the irony thing.*
Don't use that line. Its bad enough that everyone and their mom feels like they had a heart because of some lamer. We don't need Larxene joining that league.
Seriously, what's with spamming Axel's lines? Sure, he's a great character, and its fun to say "Something with a capital Something" and spout one of his memory lines. But not in your stories.
Thank you, enjoy a bottle of bleachy goodness, and try again later.
~Alice.