I know I've ranted about this 'un a few times, but it's different this time? :D

[fyretoppaaa]

... >D I showed rixis Liquid Fire a while ago, and since I have Zexion!muse and she has Xigbar... XD It ended up being an impromptu sporkfest. It isn't finished or even really complete, lolz, but we figured we'd throw it out there as a New Year's present to our lovely KHFFR comrades. :D :D :D

Quulique = myself
auryukku = rixis[Note: Bloodhound = Zexion. Yes

Comments

[demonoflight]

So Liquid Fire really is as crummy as my gut feeling insisted it is?

[fyretoppaaa]

:| Probably? All of the above was from skimming the first 10-or-so chapters of the fic. ;;

[demonoflight]

If the first 10-or-so chapters of the fic are that bad, I'd call it crummy, yes.

[fyretoppaaa]

I haven't read much of the rest, because my brain is still in the corner wibbling and wondering how one fic can so effortlessly include so many of the fandom stereotypes and faux-pas ranted about here. ;~;

[sparkism]

Quulique: you DO NOT RAPE LARXENE.
Quulique: LARXENE IS NOT RAPEABLE.
auryukku: LARXENE RAPES YOU.

xDDD WIN.

[rainbowlasers]

Quulique: no.
Quulique: you DO NOT RAPE LARXENE.
Quulique: LARXENE IS NOT RAPEABLE.
auryukku: LARXENE RAPES YOU.

I skipped the fic parts because I like my sanity, thank you but the comments! Made me laugh! Especially the one quote above LOL SO TRUE. D:

[alba_aulbath]

My brain and heart and stomach have all exploded and I am sooo tired of Saix raping everyone and WTF suicide-death? thanks to this. D:

[fanfare]

I... tried to read it.

I honestly did.

But when I realized my brain was burning and leaking out my nose, I knew the torture just had to stop.

My Zexion-muse is infuriated by it.

Try reading the dialogue out loud. Does anyone actually TALK like that? Does anyone else other than me say things aloud before they post, because reading it aloud is the fastest way to pick up on stupid wording?

edit: lol, I just did it myself. FAIL.